Reviews for The Nurse's Wife
liltrix chapter 1 . 3/20/2012
I really enjoyed your take on Rory's side of this. :D
Bianca Bubbles chapter 1 . 3/5/2012
Not sure how I missed this one! Wonderful, as always... You've really got Rory down. 3
DBack47 chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
What I believe makes this writing so successful is your application of economy. You used words very precisely, only where necessary, and let the story do the talking, not the writing by itself. In fact I almost feel as though there was room for expansion of visual details, but that's only a personal opinion. Now I cannot pass too much judgment, since I am about as clueless as a New Yorker on a Kansas farm about Doctor Who, but I get the feeling that you nailed the characterization.

One point of attention was the point of view. There was just something slightly bewildering as to whether this was a third, second, or first person perspective, but only slightly. I am concluding that it was the intent.

So what can I say, you did a fine job.

Sincerely

DBack47
Torchwood Boy chapter 1 . 9/4/2011
This is brilliant.

I really enjoyed this well done!

First Review... Yes!