Reviews for Lack of Color
ninny 1 chapter 29 . 3/11
Perfect thank you
ninny 1 chapter 19 . 3/10
Edward needs his but kicked again
Guest chapter 22 . 2/19
bella needs to just fucking stop, she allowed him to think that she left him for years...and now shes being to fucking clingy. BACK THE FUCK OFF!

Plus he cheated on you bella, he may say that he didn't fuck the whore but he was naked and he doesn't remember. So ya, he cheated. Why would you want him back? Its not like hes a catch anyway. bushy eyebrows,weird nose, too skinny, no muscles, hairy chest...ewwww
Guest chapter 21 . 2/19
Bella is so stupid. Edward fucking cheated on her. She was gone all of 3 days and hes passed out naked with some skank in his house? HE CHEATED, FUCK HIM! If he didn't cheat why the fuck was he naked?

There was no reason to contact him after that, HE is the reason they broke up. Edward can die, seriously. Oh but back to bella being stupid, she gave her money to peter to invest...probably in his name LOL can you be a bigger moron bella?
Guest chapter 13 . 2/19
Bella is a grown ass woman, shes 29! Why in the fuck cant she make it on her own? The first time they got together she needed a place too.
Guest chapter 12 . 2/19
That poem is a complete piece of shit. LOL
Guest chapter 11 . 2/19
CH 11. Edward is ready to move on with his doubt he will start with fucking that ugly dog leah.

I hope bella breaks up with peter PRONTO, like tonight and then meets someone right away too!
Guest chapter 10 . 2/19
Bella seems like a bum. She had only just lost her job when she hooked up with Edward so why did she owe so much in back rent?
Guest chapter 9 . 2/19
Edward fucked Irina right after bella left...but he was saying how he didn't like meaningless relation ships and how he only had a couple one night stands since...but now your saying he had a fuck buddy and now hes trying to jump into leahs pants...he thinks shes pretty? LOL Leah is a manly looking bitch. A native and a Edward would have some seriously ugly kids.
debba8 chapter 29 . 2/4
Just found this story and read it all the way through today and loved it so much!
charbronte chapter 26 . 11/2/2017
Guest chapter 20 . 10/5/2017
Ok first and for most any guy would have lost all his love for any girl no matter how much of a good guy his is to the girl who just admitted to fucking over like 20 guys while fucking her fiance at once! It doesn't matter how afraid she is or was of the man that is just nasty. Why settle for a used up cold pale bitch when you could fuck a warm tanned sexy woman who body in comparison is a virgin?
Guest chapter 29 . 9/5/2017
Intriguing story - lots of drama, lots of love. Glad they both finally got their heads out of their asses and worked on making their relationship work!
cheshire15 chapter 29 . 6/29/2017
Loved this story !
Tan R chapter 19 . 5/31/2017
Sigh. I give up. They're both pathetic. They deserve each other. I'm out.
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