Reviews for Lack of Color
madehoney chapter 1 . 9/4/2011
well at least she is not married *hides behind the couch*
smilton chapter 2 . 9/4/2011
Wow! This is so diffrent from what I have been reading. But I love it so far. I can't wait to see haow their realtionship progresses! Good job!
TexasTwilight77 chapter 2 . 9/4/2011
Loved it! Excellent job, Edward was just too cute. ;)
TexasTwilight77 chapter 1 . 9/4/2011
Sounds good, can't wait to get this started. ;)
tff000 chapter 2 . 9/4/2011
can't wait to see how much younger he is and ehat happened
SusanQ chapter 2 . 9/4/2011
This is off to a great start. :)
mimimgr chapter 2 . 9/4/2011
this makes me very curious to find out what happened to them...
TwiAngel13 chapter 2 . 9/4/2011
Sounds fun. Can't wait to read more.
Lilypad10 chapter 2 . 9/4/2011
Wow ,they met while she was appling for a job for him. I can really understand his stronge love for Bella. They started out as friends and them lovers. Did she leave him because of her mother?
cullenhalemccarty chapter 1 . 9/4/2011
Excelent first chapter ...

Does Bella know that Peter is Edwards cousin?
Erikajo chapter 2 . 9/4/2011
She seems like a pretty free spirit...
cejsmom chapter 2 . 9/4/2011
and so they meet - and then they are going to part and it is going to get all angsty and good and I can't wait!

And yeah, thrilled you got my friends reference on my last review! That triffle was disgusting but the commentary was excellent!
teacher1209 chapter 2 . 9/4/2011
So yeah I ask a lot of questions, it's the curious educator in me lol!

Hmm, he's younger than her, by how much? I laughed so hard when she stripped and he droPped the water. I like that he feels a connection with her and didn't just want someone who looked nice for his paintings.

I'm going to guess after graduation her mother forced her to move to Chicago and she didn't have the heart to tell Edward.
Mrs Boyscout chapter 2 . 9/4/2011
That totally qualifies as a "cute meet." Loved that she took her clothes off first thing, but, hey, so would I. ;)
spunkmehard chapter 2 . 9/4/2011
Hard to comment given what was offered this chapter but I am still willing to hang in there, you have offered enough to tease me. Just wish you hadn't used the US variation of "colour"...sorry, just bugs me but I can go along because this is your story-this will be my one and only mention. Have really enjoyed your previous stories, I'll take your hand and let you take me down your path.
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