Reviews for Lack of Color
divyvicki chapter 1 . 2/15/2015
Just starting this and am intrigued with the first chapter and the aspect of having alternate chapters between not only characters but also past and present.
Just Sus chapter 25 . 11/5/2014
Good for Bella, and for Edward, too! They both stood their ground against that f'ing asshole, Peter. I'm proud of them. OMG, what an awful life she must have had with him...he basically whored her out to men. Sick! Hopefully, he's gone for good!
Just Sus chapter 24 . 11/5/2014
Oh, no...I'd just call the police, and get his ass thrown in jail if he causes any trouble for Bella.
Just Sus chapter 13 . 11/5/2014
On top of being an asshole, he abused her, too? Shitttt...
Just Sus chapter 11 . 11/5/2014
OMG! WTF is wrong with Bella? Peter is one of the most awful, rude, chavinistic assholes I've ever read about! If I was her I would run the other way as fast as possible. How could she want to be with someone like that? He is horrible. I can't believe that Edward didn't punch him out!
Just Sus chapter 7 . 11/4/2014
Wow, she's pretty mean actually...trying to come back into his life, and turn it upside down!
Just Sus chapter 4 . 11/3/2014
Oh, Bella, you little whore!
Just Sus chapter 3 . 11/3/2014
Oh, fuck is right! What a mess!
Just Sus chapter 1 . 11/3/2014
Not a good start for Edward!
LolaTheSa chapter 7 . 10/7/2014
This girl has some balls...
Lena.in.the.sky chapter 12 . 5/27/2014
that was... possibly the sexiest thing I've ever read. wow.
Lafemmevegeta chapter 29 . 4/13/2014
What a beautiful, drama filled story. I really enjoyed both journey's of Edward and Bella growing up and getting a clue about life and adult relationships. Peter and Renee were equally bad people and manipulative. I was truly hoping Bella would give birth to a baby of theirs so I was very pleased when it happened. Wonderful story!
Lafemmevegeta chapter 1 . 4/9/2014
Oh yeah, that's very effed up!
dbpbatm chapter 29 . 4/6/2014
Fun read!
dbpbatm chapter 1 . 4/5/2014
oh this looks good...
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