Reviews for The First Day of the Rest of our Lives
saltwater10 chapter 4 . 11/23/2012
I really like this, please u
portabellosoup chapter 4 . 11/17/2012
Jake chapter 1 . 5/5/2012
well done, no complaints. One thing I notice though; when it has Ben's dialogue in italics shouldn't that be "Ben Shows" instead of "Ben say's"?

Just an observation.
FeatherTreeForest chapter 4 . 2/26/2012
updateupdateupdateupdate! Pleeeeease? I will love you forever! No, really.
FeatherTreeForest chapter 2 . 2/26/2012
You are REALLY good at this. I love these books but I could never do this stile. I love it. Just incase you didn't get it the first time. :)
FeatherTreeForest chapter 1 . 2/26/2012
I like it. You write in this stile very well. :)
purebristles chapter 4 . 1/23/2012
Lovely! You've filled in the story gap very beautifully1
u r awesome chapter 4 . 12/26/2011
Wow nice story! You should write more!
Miru-chan chapter 3 . 12/2/2011
I like it, it sounds interesting. I'd really like to read more, so please update soon! By the way, her name is Simone, not Sharon.
macka746 chapter 3 . 9/16/2011
Great as usual! Keep updating, can't wait for the second half. I'm really excited to see where this is going.

Just one thing though, I think it was Simone instead of Sharon.

Keep writing! :D

macka746 chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
Wow! I love it! I really hope you keep writing cus I'd love to keep reading!
Veila596 chapter 2 . 9/8/2011
This was another fantastic chapter. xD I love the way you write the characters perfectly. You did a great job at writing Todd. I love how you included a few incorrectly spelled words when you wrote Todd's pov. xD You write it almost exactly as it is in the books which is brilliant and makes the story all the more better. I loved reading this chapter as well. :) And I loved how you ended the chapter with one word, yes. It was really effective! xD


Veila596 chapter 1 . 9/8/2011
I love this! Before I read it I thought it looked short but its perfect. I love the way you wrote it and I'm really glad someone has begun writing a good story on this series. I loved the books so much and was totally surprised that there isnt that much on FF for them, I mean, theres such an opportunity at the very end to write something but not many people do. I had given up hope tbh. :/ But this first chapter was seriously brilliant. I love how you included a little info on the new settlers as well and I really liked the image of Ben running to Todd once he realized Todd had really woken up. And I liked the way you kept a realistic approach when writing it. I really enjoyed this and think the story has great potential. :) :D