|Reviews for Caught Up|
| ConfidentialAuthor chapter 1 . 9/10
Am I the only one who let her imagination go wild while they were caught up?
| OUT OF USE INACTIVE BLANK chapter 1 . 11/28/2011
Oh my goodness, I loved this story! It was funny, and fluffy and perfect all rolled into one!
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/27/2011
really enjoy it~what a lovely couple ~it is easy to imagine how sweet they are~
| Muffin'sback chapter 1 . 9/24/2011
| Ms. Louis Cordice Zabini chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
lol loved how they shocked everyone
| TheLightIsMine chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
"But we're you're friends" - 'You're' should be 'your'.
'When she'd turned Neville down, saying she already had a date. Ginny, Hermione...' - you need a comma, not a full stop.
And before you put closing speech marks you need either a full stop or a comma, e.g. here: "I love you, Blaise" she would murmur. You need "I love you, Blaise,".
But I love it! It's so sweet, you write these two really well. Your oneshots are always so good. :) Nice one!