Reviews for Out of Time
dcole20 chapter 1 . 10/5
This is literally the best fanfiction I have ever read.
YuHtje chapter 1 . 9/18
I loved this! But why did you let Maka forget about Soul? D':
OK so despite the gross sobbing of my inner fangirl I just wanted to say that this story was very well written and I liked your writing style a lot _
Guest chapter 1 . 3/5
What can I say? This fic is just amazing. If Soul Eater had a longer run, like one of those other series (I.e FullMetal Alchemist) I wouldn't be surprised to see this happening, at some point. In fact I'd love this to happen. However, in my opinion, the only thing that could use some editing would be the part on how she got injured. I didn't dislike the idea of the witch but maybe her future injuries (amnesia) could have been foreshadowed early on (besides the idea of the book which was left behind), as they could have been caused by her falling for example and hitting her head maybe other battle wounds (instead of 2nd degree burns) like a deep stab or something. Other than that, I really enjoyed it, specially the bittersweet ending. Good job.
Bluie64 chapter 1 . 8/4/2014
God, your story is depressing as hell. But admittedly not until the last paragraph. Damn. She's never going to regain her memories, is she. Bright side is, she will still be able to be with them, and make new, happy memories. Or will she...
Ahxis chapter 1 . 7/5/2014
Let me explain to you a thing.
/Nothing about this was okay in the least./
So I am reading it, and I get to the part where she tries to get the train to open. I kind of chuckle and think, "Sweetie, you left your book on the seat. You know. The thing that forced you into the train to begin with. If you do not leave with it, you probably will not be brought back to life. You will probably end up stranded, or something. Or come back wrong."
/I was being snide. None of that was supposed to happen./
(but i really loved this like really you are awesome.)
Lakeshine chapter 1 . 12/24/2013
Bu...but Oh my God no! Why doesn't she remember?! ( I understand I just can't handle it!) This was so, so good can you please add another chapter that is an alternative ending where she keeps the book? Please!
maka the exorcist chapter 1 . 7/3/2013
This was a really good story because it made me feel emotion. My problem is that it was sad that it made me want to cry and i dont cry easily but im like on the verge of tears. But it really was a good story.
cookies chapter 1 . 6/5/2013
normally reading angst/tragedy fics do not make me cry. Argh. Tears are literally blurring my vision. My first thoughts were like, Damn, this is really, really good and I'm pretty sure maka's dead...and...I was so not prepared for the middle part of the story and the end.
The end: could be translated to PLEASEPLEASEPLEASECONTINUE...
But of course, continuing this would ruin the impact. Nothing like a seriously well written and compelling and waterfall inducing fic to start my day. I think I'm gonna have to move on to the happy fics now...
Iridescent.Flames chapter 1 . 5/24/2013
Hands down, the most well written and compelling story I've read on this site. I don't know what else more to say about it. Great job!
Rainy chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
No. You can't be serious. That's it? She doesn't remember him, there's no continuation, nothing at all? Why do you have to write something so wonderful and then knife me in the back with your blade of depression and tragedy? Damn you waterdog, you make the reader fully feel Soul's emotional pain at the ending of this story. Might as well just write in the description, "caution: this story will shoot your heart in the face."
steph chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT you just tore my heart into piecessssss ;_; I am not okay oh my god you amazing writer/genius . THE was not expecting that ugh ok I'm leaving to try and put my heart back together thx
pachi-chan chapter 1 . 2/13/2013
... it's ok, I didn't want to be happy for the rest of the week anyway...
UGH! MAKA! why did you leave the freaking book!?
now, if you excuse me, i'm going to my little corner to cry like a baby while I'll try to give this fic a happy ending in my head and when I fail miserably, I'll curl myself up into a ball of sorrow because I can't change the end cause' maka forgot the god damn book! now she will never remember anything!
You're an amazing writer, please, next time make something a little happier!
SoulEater108 chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
One of the best stories I've read. Made me cry but really really good story
bubbleskami chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
So sad! But beautifully written! It's depressing, yes, but definitely interesing. Great first Soul Eater story!
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