Reviews for Fraterculus
SniperInTheHouse chapter 1 . 5/15
I literally just read a paragraph but thank you for having a realistic baby talk about his younger sibling. I'm tired of baby's having complex questions and able to out smart 40 year olds and learn hand to hand combat at 2 anyways I'll get on with reading
Svenion chapter 19 . 5/14
Please tell me Harry gets his head out of his ass soon. That, or you kill him off. I don't think there's room for any more angst in this story.
Mikle Silver chapter 9 . 2/24
At eleven being weak and injured he beat two six years students. What next at twelve, he will beat dragon with his bare feet. At thirteen he will kill fool nest of basilisks, and at fourteen he will beat Dark Lord like a champ?At fifth year he will be next Merlin reincarnation?
I understand the desire to have strong character, but this? Is overkill.
Sorry.
Mighty Pen 20 chapter 31 . 2/9
I can barely restrain a cackle at the way you resolved this particular plot. With the way you built it up, the instigator's death was satisfying — and Moody's antics were particularly fun to read. Great chapter, as usual.
sniperman1202 chapter 31 . 2/7
For the love of God more man I read all this in e days I haven't done that since the Force awakens book came out please more.
justanfanboy chapter 31 . 2/6
well for the A/N if somebody is going to fuck with the cloak and put spells on it, mad eye should be able to see it
Grimjowx chapter 31 . 1/30
Holy crap! I did not expect that ending to happen! Damn... thank-you so much for writing. I really appreciate you taking your time to tell us this story. O look forward to more and to the development of Harry's relationship with Daphne! TY TY TY
Guest chapter 12 . 1/29
Is there any chance of Harry/Daphne/Fleur? The stories with them three are my favorites...
SweetSouthernGal chapter 31 . 1/29
I am loving this story so far. It is definitely different from the usual Harry's sibling is the KidWhoLived storyline. How Lily and James are usually portrayed always kills me, but I find Harry with a sibling such an interesting concept (because you know Harry would be a supportive, kickass sibling) that I've ready quite a few. You definitely are taking a different approach, and it's been a great read!
Vi38 chapter 31 . 1/29
Very good update
Zicou chapter 31 . 1/29
Excellent chapter!
I don't agree we your ** point :) if Magic can beat death (and it clearly can with horcruxes for example), then there is no reason it can't beat an object made by Death :P
Continuuuue,
Z/
sinnerlust chapter 31 . 1/28
this is just my thought but I don't think the hallows were all the strong they never show really strong powers the elderwand showed no huge power in any one hands the stone brought ghost that no one could see and the cloak isn't perfect im sure the hollows were magic objects that had no connection to death my thought are is the wand made you feel unbeatable but did not give you any power the stone only shows you what you want to see and cloak is just an good invisibility cloak
Mighty Pen 20 chapter 30 . 12/21/2016
This story definitely deserves much more recognition. It is one of the very very few good ones in its category. It is well written, gripping, and you have some very interesting and refreshing ideas.

Well, the only negative point (if we can call it that) is the apparent slow update rate. I really hope that you will find time and inspiration to write more, faster. Either way, good job.
stevefocus chapter 16 . 11/27/2016
Harry acts like a complete twat in this chapter an Daniel is worse, hope they get better soon.
MichaelJ-D chapter 20 . 11/26/2016
It's so obvious that they like each other hahahaha
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