|Reviews for Firstborn Sons|
| Guest chapter 38 . 6/7
This story made me sick. The beginning is good. I can even understand Draco be forgiven even he raped an innocent girl under the circumstance. However, to let Lucious free, portrait him as loving father, who is truly a monster during the war, corruption afterwards, then tricked much less an offender into jail, who was kissed later... this is beyond disgusting. Author needs some serious thinking about her/his moral standard.
(This is my first time to comment so harshly. I really wish I am not going to accidentally read this kind of sick story.)
| Scherherazade chapter 38 . 6/10/2015
A lovely and unique story. I especially loved how you wrote Draco. He was the perfect tortured hero. And when he feel in love it was a beautiful thing to see.
| LuciFern chapter 17 . 1/13/2015
I realize this story is a few years old at this point, but I wanted to let you know just how much I'm enjoying it. It's difficult to find a story that reads well, and even harder in a fandom as flush as this one. The settings, the characters, the scenario are all incredibly done. While I was hesitant to begin reading this amongst all the other stories I had open at the time (the length is right in between the lengths I typically read), it has more than surprised me.
It's enthralling, difficult to take a break from, even as breaks are needed to digest the drama. The chapters are middling length, but it all feels as though there's more than just the words there.
Thank you for sharing this work.
| Guest chapter 38 . 11/3/2014
Loved this story! Great plot & who can resist Dramione?
| midnightmoonstorm chapter 11 . 8/15/2014
The last line 'how do you like it in the underground' made me smile :) I don't know if you of the movie "the labyrinth" with David bowie but he sings a song called the underground, and well that was my first thought lol. The story might be finished but I'm starting to read it. ;)
| SusanMarieS chapter 38 . 5/27/2014
Thank you very much for this story. I loved alot about it. Very inventive.
| Tee dree chapter 1 . 4/23/2014
You have a huge talent! You really should be
a professional writer, if you are not one yet.
Loved the fic and was in awe with your creativity.
| Alybethed chapter 24 . 4/14/2014
Lmao I knew it!
| Alybethed chapter 15 . 4/14/2014
"Our Love is silver and gold, so why do you run?"
My favorite line, Love it.
| PaigeAdams5972 chapter 1 . 4/9/2014
The storyline is very original. Definitely not something I have read before, I loved it!
| Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 38 . 3/25/2014
Aww! Such a sweet ending for a great story.
| Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 34 . 3/25/2014
Damn! Draco was so smooth and romantic!
| Guest chapter 15 . 3/23/2014
| Guest chapter 12 . 3/23/2014
I love this so much!
| Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 31 . 3/20/2014
I wanted to read the rest of Hermione's article.