Reviews for When Will The Torment End?
MCJwolflover chapter 16 . 7/12
Please write some more, I like it so far.
Liljaiiris chapter 15 . 5/3
Please continue, it would be great to know, how the story will end :)
Roshimon chapter 16 . 2/29
You have 3 stories..3 incomplete stories.
A writer should not start what they really have no intention of finishing. It is especially rude when readers invest in the story and then the author asks for reviews, then leaves the readers hanging.
alh1971 chapter 16 . 2/5
So sorry to hear about your mom. I'm sending you a hug and prayers from Dallas...
I love this story and want to let you know that I'll continue to read any updates you post-when your muse returns.
Guest chapter 16 . 1/3
More, more, more! Pleeeeeeeeease?
Guest chapter 6 . 1/3
I love a good naughty, bad ass Jacob. And, it's Jacob. We know he'll redeem himself. ;)
alixandria chapter 16 . 10/24/2015
I love this story... I really hope you finish it?
alixandria chapter 15 . 10/23/2015
Be smart Paul and back off and let Jake and Bells be together!
alixandria chapter 14 . 10/23/2015
Way to go Jake! Now go claim your Bells!
alixandria chapter 13 . 10/23/2015
dump Lauren! Bella is way better suited for you!
alixandria chapter 12 . 10/19/2015
Wow! that was just Wow! they love each other?!
alixandria chapter 11 . 10/18/2015
lol... I love them together.. Now Jake just needs to get rid of Lauren!
alixandria chapter 10 . 10/18/2015
Hmmm... looks like they are falling for each other?!
alixandria chapter 9 . 10/18/2015
ah Bella, just relax!
alixandria chapter 8 . 10/18/2015
uh oh! lol
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