Reviews for Waiting
Myriddin chapter 1 . 10/5/2014
Very nice. Thanks for sharing.
Fallyn Irlandes chapter 1 . 2/14/2014
Mm. the two-by-four bush whacking line. I loved it, it made me smile.
Also...*bangs head against wall* I kind of understand why it has to end there, but does it really have to end there? :)
obsessive360 chapter 1 . 4/13/2013
And the Goblin King has arrived. Toby, be careful what you wish for! :D
Rehema chapter 1 . 5/26/2012
Very good writing. Nice interpretation/characterization-reflects serious effort & thought.

I'm really, really glad you brought Jareth in at the end. :)
Dontgotaclue88 chapter 1 . 1/26/2012
LOL! Please let this be a 2 shot. Sooo want to read more. ,
Broken-Rose-Thornesxoxo chapter 1 . 12/28/2011
More? Please? I can't wait for more... If there is any more... which I hope there is.

Solea chapter 1 . 10/23/2011
I cried when I read this. It was beautifully done.
Annie C chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
So sweet! I absolutely loved this! 3
startraveller776 chapter 1 . 9/8/2011
Aw...all warm and fuzzy. I love a Toby who loves Sarah. *sigh*

And that ending. I really, really hope you do end up making this a two-shot!
ChaosAngel4us chapter 1 . 9/6/2011
This was fantastic. You did a really amazing job on this; I like it as a one-shot, but adding another chapter wouldn't hurt ;)
glasshibou chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
Oh, you absolutely have to continue this, even with just one more chapter.
JaegerNut chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
Aww,that was so sweet! Loved it.
The Harlequin Pirate chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
Very nice :) please write more, I'd love to see what Toby thinks of Jareth
SerenadeInTheMoonlight chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
This is really good and getting really interesting! I can't wait to read more!
thisaccountiscloseddeleteit chapter 1 . 9/4/2011
This was quite a good read! I'd like for you to continue. I love the scenario, it's a really good story.
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