Very very good I'm not interested for cross overs but that was awesome though I am sad that there isn't more

Love it

I dig it. The first chapter could use a bit of editing since it's rougher than the rest of the story. Case in point referring to shinobu by as a lolicon instead of a loli. I would also tone down some of the dank anime memes such as absolute territory and what not

This is a well written story, please continue this so I can maintain my sanity.

Augh, you stole my idea for my ongoing story! Really, I've been planning on planting little seeds in the WMG entries of both shows, but you already had to go and write it...(harumph).

Oh well, it was only a whole story arc involving Eva-chan.

Know what? I'll finish it anyway. Just don't say I stole your idea!
But this was even better than the last chapter, I must say. Shinobu-chan is just amazing, isn’t she?

Good retelling, but I still didn't like the ending of Kizumonogatari. That's why I'm redoing everything myself as well...

Honestly very good. The last bit was very nosebleed-worthy. I also liked how you explained all the terms for the non-tropers.

You have to continue this!
This story is to good to just die on the fourth chapter!

Please update sooooon
I'm getting impatient

Please continue this story it's FU**ING AMAZING!

Please continue this story, it's to good to be forgotten:)

Great idea))

this amuses me. will this be continued?

Well now, this is certainly shaping up to be a groundbreaker, non? I love the crossovers, good mix, and more womennnn! After all, Kiss-sama demands it-

...HOLY FUCK! Sorry, the eating part was something I forgot about, but damn you do a good job with this story.