Reviews for With My Freeze Ray
Bookworm85 chapter 1 . 1/27
Aww, so sad. What an interesting alternative ending!
Founderblade chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
Wow, this was really sad... Painful, even. But it's really well written, and I love it! Loved the horseshoe, a nice detail! Good job!
This-Account-Is-Inactiveee chapter 1 . 1/8/2012
Oh my gosh this is so brilliant! Sad and heart wrenching but brilliant. Bravo! :)
OshieGringlebosh chapter 1 . 10/19/2011
You made me cry! The real ending didn't even do that! *sniff* I need a cookie now :(
CountryGrl chapter 1 . 9/14/2011
Oh, wow. This is beautifully sad. I especially liked...oh, but now about four things come to mind...I especially liked all of it! Well done.
TayuyaFluteofDeath chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
Ouch. I already thought the real ending was sad enough, but that just made it even more painful. You're a damn good writer.
Geeky Pony chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
awww poor billy

poor penny