|Reviews for The Game of Champions|
| UnlimitedFreeIceCream chapter 8 . 12/2/2012
Loved the chapter! Keep up the good work and update again soon!
| DrkVrtx chapter 4 . 12/2/2012
I believe we often make the best discoveries by mistake, and for the me, this story is most certainly one of those discoveries. I am oh so happy to have stumbled across this...this masterpiece, and of the chapters presently available, I'm only halfway through!
I really like what you've done with the Red/Pikachu relationship. I've always found the way Pikachu is presented in the anime somewhat annoying; it's overpowered simply for the sake of it seems, but here you've done a remarkable job in explaining and exploring just why Red's Pikachu is Red's Pikachu. The parallels between he and it are tangible and one can see the nature of the relationship blooming even from the very first encounter.
The scope and depth of this world you've depicted is...breathtaking. I can't say how much I love the depiction of the Gym Leaders/Elite Four/Champion. Considering the number of games and various other pokemon media we have now, those higher echelons of the pokemon battling domain have - for me, at least - lost their charm. They rarely seem to possess that gravitas that propels them above your run of the mill trainer, but here...well, wow. I'm itching to finish this review and find out just how Red manages to overcome Brock. All in all, absolutely amazing stuff : )
| JoojooBrother chapter 8 . 12/2/2012
This story is slow-paced, but Red's attitude and the sexy sexy worldbuilding not only make up for it, but make it a better option then a quicker version. Love it!
| TMNTurtwig chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
I 3 bulbasaurs.
| Juliano2991 chapter 8 . 12/2/2012
Brilliant chapter and story, I specially enjoy the profiles you give to some pokémon on the end of the each chapter. I love the cynical and calculating way Red lives by and connects with other people, without being whiny. He is my favourite character by just a ,because the High selfsteem, sarcastic and witty Gary is a very close second.
I don't what you plan for the future of the teams but it seems to me that you have a strategy and I'll wait and see, it will probably be good.
I just wish you could update more frequently, cause is in the intermission time between great fanfictions updates that I wade through the piles of shit that exist in these site.
Last I want to ask for another great pokémon fanfic, because I for the life of me can't find any.
Thank you for the entertainement and keep up the good work.
My sincerest regards
| Guest chapter 8 . 12/2/2012
Once again an extremely well written chapter! I envy you as a writer, love you as a story teller and respect you for your Dense writing style.
| YipYip chapter 8 . 12/2/2012
So good. Love the lore you're wrapping into the story.
| smurr79 chapter 8 . 12/2/2012
Whelp If i ever have anything with substance to say I'll say it on DLP, suffice to say I have about 40 stories on my alert list, and this is one of perhaps 3 that I'm /genuinely/ looking forward to at all times. i barely go a day without checking to see if there's been an update. Can't wait to see where it's all going, and if you ever plan on publishing anything I hope you make it known here, because even minus the fact that i love pokemon you're writing is exceptional.
| Uchiha Sasuke XII chapter 8 . 12/2/2012
I always rejected the assumption that the number of reviews of a story defines how good it is. And this story proves it. The Game of Champions is just amazing. The way you pay attention to every small detail and then using them as part of the plot (ACE coming back to bite Red in the ass, Oak being much
more than a professor) is nothing short of a masterpiece.
The characters are also diverse and realistic. Red, Blue, Brock, Brock's father, Green...the list goes on. The world you made feels so...complete that I can imagine each scene with great detail.
Oh, and the Pokedex entries. They aren't really that important (unless you plan to prove me wrong later :P) but the way you write them shows how much effort you put into every part of this story. All in all, I love this fanfic, and I definitely look forward to the next chapter!
PS: You've inspired me to start writing a fic myself, so thank you! :D
| Snorkackle chapter 8 . 12/2/2012
I hope Misty grows a pair and goes all out against Red
| Duquette7 chapter 8 . 12/2/2012
As always a masterful crafted, and worded chapter, you paint a picture of an incredibly detailed, and engaging world that actually makes sense, which is bloody hard with pokemon.
| FE96jAFFAR chapter 7 . 11/27/2012
This... is pure. Fucking. Gold.
I seriously don't have anything bad to say about this in terms of things to fix.
Dark story? Who gives a damn, that's what it IS.
Contrasting points of view? Works perfectly.
Red's thoughts and the fact that it's all written as if it's being told? Wonderful.
I'm serious. I have nothing bad to say about this.
| YipYip chapter 7 . 11/26/2012
The world you built is fantastic, it's a breath of new life into Pokemon fandom. I like the little things you include in the chapters that ripple through and come up later on, the forethought and planning is impressive. Thanks for keeping me well entertained!
| SparkCrystal chapter 7 . 11/24/2012
love your way of writing and the way you portray the characters. I feel like i really can relate to them and like they're actually three demensional. I can't wait to read more when you get time to write. :)
| Avasaya chapter 7 . 11/24/2012
I really love the world of pokemon that you've painted here.
I usually stay away from pokemon fics because of how unrealistic they are, but yours is incredibly believable.
I really hope to see more from you soon.