Reviews for Taken in the Night
almondgirl3 chapter 8 . 11/20/2013
I like that you've made this more real than what would normally have been done on here. Sometimes I can enjoy those fics, but having more of a battle between Bella and Edward is satisfying and offers great conflict and chances to grow.
almondgirl3 chapter 6 . 11/19/2013
Sounds like he's got split personalities or something.
Guest chapter 11 . 11/15/2013
Please finish
Vernoodle chapter 11 . 11/10/2013
Please please update! :(((
OPOSOJOJ chapter 11 . 11/3/2013
Loving it!
foreveryoursxx chapter 11 . 11/2/2013
janeo'k chapter 11 . 11/1/2013
This is an amazing story, I'm sorry to hear that you're life is so complicated that the moment. I hope things settle soon. If you have the time, could you repost the original 'Taken'? I understand if you'd rather rewrite the whole thing, but I'd really like to see what this story is based on- to see how it ends and how you've changed it when re-editing. Best of luck with your children and I hope your mother feels better soon.
Guiltilyinnocent chapter 11 . 10/30/2013
Whoa that was... Addictive. It's such a twisted relationship, I feel bad for him despite it all. I wish she'd asked him out before he'd left even if that would've been crazy, I hope he hasn't gone to hang himself... Brilliant story, well done- seriously that could be published. I really hope you continue it, that endings probably more realistic but it's just so sad!
SusayyQ chapter 1 . 10/30/2013
You said this is not the end! Please don't make this the end! PLEASE
I love this story too much
charlie chapter 11 . 10/15/2013
Please write more I love it! I want to know what happens
SVMlover1378 chapter 11 . 10/13/2013
When will the next update be?
Guest chapter 11 . 10/8/2013
plzz continue
Catrina-M chapter 11 . 10/7/2013
You are an amazing writer this is a fabulous story. I just read about the troubles you're experiencing and I wanted to let you know that I'm praying for you and your family. Hang in there!
susy22 chapter 11 . 10/5/2013
OMG! My heart just broke in pieces for Edward. Fantstic story. You are such a talented writer. So sorry about the hardships you are facing. Sending positive thoughts your way.
bringchocolate chapter 2 . 10/5/2013
Praying for you and your family,peace
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