Reviews for Taken in the Night
Annie's words chapter 2 . 9/6/2011
I would leave! without a doubt!
Annie's words chapter 1 . 9/6/2011
caught my atention at the first sentence! sounds awesome!
lavyalice chapter 3 . 9/6/2011
:) :) it is awesome
lavyalice chapter 2 . 9/6/2011
Nrbl1 chapter 4 . 9/6/2011
will we be getting any EPOV? I am feeling very sorry for Edward right now and looking forward to getting some back ground on him...
CinnamonKitty chapter 4 . 9/6/2011
I am completely hooked on this story! Wow! Thanks!
GLee68 chapter 4 . 9/6/2011
I'm wanting to hear Edward's reasons and his thoughts now...

C'mon Bella! Breathe a little and ask him some questions!
bellacullen1234 chapter 4 . 9/6/2011
omg im so happy your reposting this story this one of my favotire ones to ever to read lol i would always read it from time to time i was super sad when you took it down but im really happy that you're rewritting by the way loved the chapter cant wait for the next one
GorGirl chapter 4 . 9/6/2011
I'm dying to know his story. I did read Taken a year or so ago, but can't remember the details, and it's bugging me. I guess that means I can't wait to read it again.
Della291 chapter 4 . 9/6/2011
Not sure - I think I really feel sorry for Edward! I mean COME ON it's HIM! I'd be really freaked out to be in her situation but wih a kidnapper like Rob (uhm I mean Edward) I'd be a little more comfortable.
brittl76 chapter 2 . 9/6/2011
Let's pretend I didn't read the orginal for this review.

This line right here

"Please," he implored quietly. "Please don't leave me."

From someone that kidnapped me...

makes me shiver

Like all I hear is "it puts the lotion on" *shudders*

His genuine concern for her is just straight up strange and I don't blame her for her reaction and probably would be doing way more damage if I was here since I don't see any weapons on him.

Of course fear makes you do things you may not have or do things you shouldn't do.

He is so awkward and socially inept.
brittl76 chapter 1 . 9/6/2011
yay, i am so happy you are re-posting this story. I kind or wish I didn't read the original, so I can be surprised as it unravels. At the same time can't wait to see the differences from the orginal. What to know if you go the same general direction or if you change it all together.

Now for the first chapter review, how freaking creepy it is to wake up in a strange bed and strange room. I mean i had a many of nights that happened to me, but i was in my 20's and there was copious amounts of alcohol involved.

You did a great job in making me feel her fear in this chapter
Della291 chapter 3 . 9/6/2011
Okay this is kinda freaking me out. Not really sure what the hell is going on here.
Della291 chapter 2 . 9/6/2011
I didn't get the read the first posting of Taken so don't really have anything to compare this to, but I'm hooked so far!
Della291 chapter 1 . 9/6/2011
OK - so THAT'S really fucking chilling to wake up in that situation!
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