|Reviews for Vis Insita|
| Bywater chapter 7 . 2/27/2013
Fascinating story, great humor, exciting action, good character development, spot on dialog, love the Neville/Luna additions. Started Momentum a few days ago, and haven't done much else but read. Very impressive.
| MadelinePaige chapter 7 . 1/10/2013
good job. virtually error free and a great plot:) wish you would update faster though!
| AragornII chapter 7 . 1/8/2013
Continue to enjoy your unfolding of this adventure. Appreciate the re-entry of Kylie into the story...
| Guest chapter 7 . 1/7/2013
Soooo happy to see a new chapter! Interesting that the two Alpha's are already snarling at each other. Also interesting that Scott and Hermione are developing a sort of partnership.
As always, eagerly awaiting more...
| fmcmahon4 chapter 7 . 1/7/2013
Good chapter, looking forward to seeing how the group handles their first real mission. I like the touch of having the first "mission" be saving Kylie's parents, though I'm curious as to why the Death Eaters didn't take Kylie as well. One other thing I'm curious about is your decision to make the locket they found in the underground lake to be the real horcrux. It's an interesting divergence from the book that I wasn't quite prepared for. Of course, you may have discussed this in a previous chapter (or in the other story) but I don't quite remember if you did or not of the top of my head. Anyway, keep up the good work and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
| Shypman chapter 7 . 1/7/2013
You really have a talent for getting the personalities down perfectly. That is the most important thing in a fanfiction. Also, I actually enjoyed the humor, so there you go.
This story is incredible, and I'm always thinking about the next chapter...
| gonekrazy3000 chapter 7 . 1/7/2013
Awesome chapter! this is quickly becoming one of my fav stories.
Cant wait for the next one :) i do hope to see some Harry shotgun action eventually...
Preferably blasting away riddle :D
| Caleb Nova chapter 7 . 1/7/2013
See, this is why I hate the reply system: I can't reply to anonymous reviews.
I'm assuming that 'Rosalind' is referring to Scott discussing the encircling of an enemy, since I don't recall him discussing anything else close to Sun Tzu (I wasn't actually quoting him). 'Rosalind' conveniently didn't specify exactly what I did wrong. If they were indeed referring to that section, they are correct in that the particular reasons Scott describes for not encircling an enemy are more applicable to large land battles. But that's just Scott being very general in his advice (and not entirely on target, as usual). It still applies, however, unless 'Rosalind' thinks crossing your lines of fire is a great idea. You generally don't want to line up opposite your own guns (and Scott wasn't getting into height advantage or lack thereof - he just said there were always exceptions).
If anyone else wants to argue the point, at least log in or leave an email. Scott may be an a-hole and an idiot, but it looks like he's not alone.
| Rosalind chapter 7 . 1/7/2013
Scott is both an A-hole and an idiot. Stop quoting Sun Tzu you which it isn't applicable to small unit tactics but only to large numbers in a land based conflict.
So much for his superior military knowledge and experience.
If you are going to try and write small unit tactics either enlist or find a grunt not some POG.
| RedEuthyphro chapter 7 . 1/6/2013
It's a testament to how engrossing this is and how well it flows that I didn't realize the level of research that had to have gone into the Playboy joke until you pointed it out in your author's note.
| Hahukum Konn chapter 7 . 1/6/2013
I like this more intellgent and proactive group of Horcrux-Hunters. :D
| YouDontNeedToKno chapter 6 . 1/3/2013
Forgive the shortness of this review, but i'm writing it on a tablet.
1. Personally, i don't really care about Luna and Neville's relationship, but either way is fine by me.
2. Sure, why not.
3. Quotes are good, keep using them.
Great as always, update soon plzzz.
| jcgeorge chapter 6 . 12/20/2012
I was off FF for about 2yrs, came back to see this. Very thrilled! I love your writing style, please keep it coming! :)
| Guest chapter 6 . 12/10/2012
Glad to see this story coming back-looking forward to whatever comes next!
| Guest chapter 6 . 12/7/2012
Another wonderful chapter - I do appreciate the quotes and I appreciate this story even more. I can't wait to see where you take them next!