I loved this story. I hope you'll do another very soon!

Hehehe, Merlin's conversation sounds like the one I had the other day. Not fun times... But it wasn't about magic I'm afraid, it would be cool if it was. ;)

Mags

Aww I feel so bad for them both :'(

Great chapter

i loved how showed how one parent is reasonable and one is not in their feelings of disappointment.

i really liked this chapter. lets you kinda see why arthur works so hard to avoid failure and why it hits him so hard when he does.

Brilliant! I really enjoyed it! Poor boys! What's next? I'm interested to see how many chapters you get out of this considering Merlin went to Camelot at the age of nineteen! :)

:(

Only one more chapter.

I think you could end this on a pleasant note though, with Merlin and Arthur meeting. *Hint*

Really good chapter, one of my favourites so far :)

I liked how you wrote Will finding out, it was really good.

Keep it up!

I think you should make a oneshot about Leon! You're writing style is nice, and I'd like to see his thoughts on the others from your POV _

Good chapter. It's fun to see the boys acting pretty much how they are when they meet.

Interesting one-shots. :)

What a gorgeous chapter! I like how Arthur still had that flicker of shame before he forced himself to put is aside. It's like he does feel it, but doesn't let himself acknowledge it.

Ooh, love how you made Will find out, that was awesome. And Merlin's reaction was fantastic!

I do feel bad for leon. Please excuse my language, but in this arthur is an ass. he said he could speak freely, he did, and then he is gonna get punished for it. I HATE YOU ARTHUR! Maybe more of this anger stems from episode 4.3 and his whole 'magic is SUUUUUper evil' tirade, but still. Anyway, please update soon!

That was very charming. I hope more chapters come quickly. Oh poor Merlin-the next girl he ever feels that way for will die T_T

Aww! That was adorable! I really like the way that you've done it!