Reviews for Five Days
LunaStories chapter 2 . 7/25/2012
I really like how through the five days, the interaction etween Ace and Marco go tcloser and closer xD Like, how Ace slowly let his guard down and warmed up to Marco. :) It's really fun to see :D
LunaStories chapter 3 . 7/25/2012
Wow, after all that he finally felt 'some' guilt . I would be very very guilty by then... I love how Ace was all unintentionaly seducing Marco at the end :D I loved it xD
LunaStories chapter 4 . 7/25/2012
C'mon Marco! Eat the forbidden fruit! xD But seriously, Marco is so perverted :) It's hilarious.
LunaStories chapter 5 . 7/25/2012
WH-? You can't just end it like that! *Sobs* I really want to see what happens! T_T But that was a very very hot lemon xD Only Marco can handle Ace's heat! lol Now to go and review the rest of the chapters...
Guest chapter 5 . 7/25/2012
lol your clothes...heheh
roo17 chapter 5 . 7/10/2012
Haha! I wonder how they'll explain this to the crew! XD That was great, I loved it. The descriptions of Marco's phoenix mode and fire were brilliant. The plot was also great. Awesome job! :D
roo17 chapter 4 . 7/10/2012
Oh, Ace kissed the phoenix! Poor Marco, I thought he'd have a heart-attack or something! Can't wait to see the outcome of this!
roo17 chapter 3 . 7/10/2012
Wow, just wow. The whole interaction scene between Ace and the phoenix was great and touching. I wonder how Marco will come out and finally tell Ace, or will Ace figure it out himself? Hm... I think it's time to read the next chapter! XD
roo17 chapter 2 . 7/10/2012
This is so great! I love how Marco trying to keep his powers a secret, and how Ace gets so damn excited when he sees the phoenix! It's so cute! XD
roo17 chapter 1 . 7/10/2012
I like it! The way you describe the fire as Marco bathed in it, and the way he flew from the ship was beautiful! And I like how you added the phoenix's need to bathe in fire five days a year. Very nice!
ShikaTachidoriKitsuneHebiTaka chapter 5 . 6/8/2012
lol. THAT must be akward. i cant see a way to get around that. poor Marco, Ace, you will be the gossip for some while...
reodavle chapter 5 . 6/6/2012
Epic ending! Woohoo! \(/)\
Aivelin chapter 5 . 5/17/2012
It's the first and the best fanfiction about Marco ans Ace I've read (long time ago btw). I signed in this site to leave reviews and to make you know: a lot of people like your fanworks and you're amazing writer.

If you're interested, I don't prefer angst and other 'bad mood' things but when I find a good author as you I easily became a masochist and read everything to have a chance to feel the special aura.

I totally in love with that story and drew few fanarts after I became a fan of this pairing because of you. I want to translate it to my native language if it's allowed.
faery7 chapter 5 . 1/14/2012
hahahahaha! loved the ending :D poor guys got some explaining to do :) very cute story
lilyoftheval5 chapter 5 . 12/23/2011
Loved the story. I felt so mellow after finishing it.
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