Reviews for Five Days
softdreamer chapter 5 . 4/5/2013
I really liked it :D
good work
misomilk chapter 5 . 2/10/2013
OMGGGGGG That was beautifullll ;AAAA; Every word of every sentence of every paragraph of every chapter. UGGHHH ;AAAAAA;

I love how you dealt with Marco's and Ace's flames. I, too, have a headcanon of them being "right" for each other because of each other's flames. D'aww. *A* This was an absolutely beautiful read, topped with an adorable comedic ending. xD

Thank you for the read *A*
misomilk chapter 3 . 2/10/2013
Okay I told myself I wouldn't review until the last chapter because I'll prolly take too long trying to word out my review so perfectly for such a perfect-writing authoer *A*

BUT OMGGG THIS LINE MADE MY HEART CLENCH SO BAD "But the main reason he couldn't just be honest with him was because he knew that as soon as the truth came out, Ace wouldn't trust him again. Not after this. " ;AAAAA;

I love youuu and your MarcoxAce and gahhhhh ;AAA;
thepresentgift18 chapter 1 . 2/6/2013 I freakin' LOVE you! I randomly found your story on tumblr and was like hey, maybe it'll be a good one. And miracles do happen! I am insane over how you write! It's all soaked with amazingness and marinated in genius that this is staying in my favs forever! I couldn't stop reading this at all ( it's now 5:17am) lol! Everything was so great about Marco's Devil Fruit phoenix, and just omg it's just so amazing I can't stop going crazy! And with the island on fire, that was such a win I woke up my brother laughing at the situation. (I like to imagine when they get together that something always ends up being burned and destroyed cause they're just so hawt :D) My god you have just made my entire night and I thank you with much gratuity! Good lord you are an amazing writer! Thanks bunches again! 3
Anjelle chapter 5 . 1/22/2013
This was an awesome story XD I loved it, as usual. You're a great writer and your plots are really interesting :) Thanks for the hard work!
yaoilover chapter 5 . 12/11/2012
woow, i loved this story3 wish it was more!
silentwinged chapter 5 . 11/17/2012
Zolufangirl17 chapter 5 . 10/7/2012
hahaha, I laughed alot at the end! I loved this story!
LunaStories chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
Last review! Well, all in all, I give you a lot of credit for being a genius and somehow coming up with this brilliant idea :) Cus seriously? I never thought about the 'phoenix rebirth' thing before xD So you're really creative X3 I also really loved how at the end Ace just wordlessly accepted Marco :3 I thought that was really sweet :D I also like how the story started with Marco having perverted thoughts and dreams xD
Actually, I liked how Marco was a pervert through the whole story. LOL Even in bird form xD I hope you will make more creative stories like this in the future :)
LunaStories chapter 2 . 7/25/2012
I really like how through the five days, the interaction etween Ace and Marco go tcloser and closer xD Like, how Ace slowly let his guard down and warmed up to Marco. :) It's really fun to see :D
LunaStories chapter 3 . 7/25/2012
Wow, after all that he finally felt 'some' guilt . I would be very very guilty by then... I love how Ace was all unintentionaly seducing Marco at the end :D I loved it xD
LunaStories chapter 4 . 7/25/2012
C'mon Marco! Eat the forbidden fruit! xD But seriously, Marco is so perverted :) It's hilarious.
LunaStories chapter 5 . 7/25/2012
WH-? You can't just end it like that! *Sobs* I really want to see what happens! T_T But that was a very very hot lemon xD Only Marco can handle Ace's heat! lol Now to go and review the rest of the chapters...
Guest chapter 5 . 7/25/2012
lol your clothes...heheh
roo17 chapter 5 . 7/10/2012
Haha! I wonder how they'll explain this to the crew! XD That was great, I loved it. The descriptions of Marco's phoenix mode and fire were brilliant. The plot was also great. Awesome job! :D
96 | « Prev Page 1 .. 2 3 4 5 6 .. Last Next »