Reviews for Five Days
nestealove chapter 5 . 12/12/2011
lollzz i luv the end :D hahaha

"Everyone's going to come and investigate.

And our clothes are all burnt up." :O
Rosales chapter 5 . 10/30/2011
awwww omg I think this is one of the best AcexMarco stories I have red! I really like this pairing and I must compliment you on the idea of Marcos rebirth! it's kinda cool to see him act in an animal kind of mood and how his animalistic side seems to grow stronger and try to push him to take Ace right there xD

Really good! :)) hope you keep on writting AxM stories, I'll be your huge fan ;)
azab chapter 5 . 10/24/2011
i loved it a lot
azab chapter 4 . 10/24/2011
i loved it a lot
azab chapter 3 . 10/24/2011
i loved it a lot
azab chapter 1 . 10/24/2011
i loved it a lot
LittleLunaChan chapter 5 . 10/23/2011
I. Loved. It.

It was perfect, I am a total sucker for Marco x Ace and the whole phoenix re-birth was awesome! It's too bad it's only 5 chapters long, I can't get enough of it

Would you mind if I use the idea of Marco and the re-birth etc in one of my future fanfics? I've always wanted to write a Marco x Ace fanfic and it seems like a really interesting idea. Of course I'll change things so it won't be the same but I think I should ask first nontheless... :)
Lily chapter 5 . 10/6/2011
I'm sorry I didn't review this earlier! I really enjoyed this story (:
hilian chapter 5 . 9/26/2011
the sex scene was simply HOT.!

and the ending realy good xD

aah I still want mooooreeee it could be great if you write epilogue! I'm so curious about their relationship now * v *

I loved this fanfiction very much!

thanks for writing it * u *
hilian chapter 4 . 9/26/2011
ok so I have no more words to describe how I love this fic so far.

omg it's so pretty * u *

and so ... -thinks for 5 mins what to say- ... yeah, awesome *_*

I really loved the connection you made between Marco's and Ace's fire!
hilian chapter 3 . 9/26/2011
aaah -cries- so beautiful ; u ;

omg , I found the part Marco touches Ace, hot.


well 8Da

great work u
hilian chapter 2 . 9/26/2011
aah another awesome chap. * U *

I really love how you write Marco, and Ace. [aww Ace pouts /u/]

I really wonder how will Ace react when he know that it's Marco dhbetjhnsrygjn

good work D !
hilian chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
I loved this so much * u * I mean, Marco's devil fruit is so awesome I think it's the best in OP , it made me happy that you wrote about it and it was really interesting.

the part Ace told Marco how cool he is , was really nice ;p

-going to read the next chap D -
MissJudged16 chapter 5 . 9/26/2011
This is wonderful! I love the pairing and you wrote this very well.
crazzyredhead chapter 5 . 9/25/2011
lol i love this story and hope you update again soon. lol
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