Reviews for Thunderstorm attraction
XionAmmy chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
*laughs hysterically* OMG, that last line… pure friggin' gold! XD

Okay, more serious now. Little errors scattered here and there, a couple typos—the story makes up for it, as far as I'm concerned, but they are there. Nitpicky things, really—I can be really uptight about grammar… ."
EX: the phrase "… basically conserved the blonde her friend" should have been "… basically considered the blonde her friend".
There are a couple of places where segments and phrases don't flow properly for lack of periods—too many clauses held together by commas or commas in places one would normally put a period.

Overall, a wonderful story—cute, fluffy daily moment fic where the positive aspects greatly outweigh the negative aspects. Nice job, once again!
bikiniwax chapter 1 . 9/30/2011
Lol Xigbar...
breedy95 chapter 1 . 9/8/2011
So cute! :3 Good old Larxene for looking after Namine. Looks like you're just as good at yuri as you are at yaoi
HikariFighter chapter 1 . 9/7/2011
Naaaaaw! This was so kawaii!

I mean, tiny sweet Naminé with big evil Larxene... except, she's not so evil when it comes to Naminé, is she? :3

But I can't help but to feel bad for Xigbar. Larxene... sounded worse than seriously pissed XD

Well done!

...and I just realized that this is the first yuri I've read. Like ever o.0