|Reviews for Deeper Love|
| CaandyyCat chapter 18 . 11/5
Amazingly cute ! Ahh! Loved the plot line was sooooo amazing!
| Captain Altaria chapter 18 . 7/29
I adore this fic! I read it some years ago and forgot to review, and now I'm more active reviewing, this would be the right moment.
I love the way you brought Danny and Rudy back, and I can totally see Ash looking for too much behind anything Rudy does out of suspicion. But I can't even blame him, Rudy proposed MARRIAGE to a TEN YEAR OLD in the anime. Pretty creepy... And the 'friendshippy date' concept from Rudy... Also something some guys used on a friend of mine to get her to date them, of course it didn't work!
And Ash ending up with Gary's help is so awesome! And I love how you made Misty uninterested in other guys after the breakup, very in-character, some authors mess that up.
After all, 9/10. When you start reading this one, you can't stop until you're finished.
| Nami chapter 18 . 7/14
| Nami chapter 17 . 7/14
It was kinda rushed, but ok.
Paul will probably spend his whole life trying to avenge his dad and brother lol
| Nami chapter 16 . 7/14
Omg, so it was all revenge? This plot got a lot more complex than I expected!
| Nami chapter 15 . 7/14
Giovanni wants to kill Ash? Noooooo!
| Nami chapter 14 . 7/14
Why the heck would TR kidnap Misty? :o
| Guest chapter 12 . 7/14
Lol the dude walks around with TR's card?
| Nami chapter 11 . 7/14
WHAT? Delia didn't die because of the accident?
WAS IT MISTY'S STALKER?
At least now Ash knows she didn't cheat on him.
| Nami chapter 8 . 7/14
So Rudy savedher just to try the same thing as the gangsters? -.-
| Nami chapter 6 . 7/14
Lol, someone was watching them? That's scary
| Nami chapter 4 . 7/14
So did Rudy really try to get her drunk? D:
And I feel bad for Ash. It's clear Rudy doesn't want to be just friends... Misty shouldn't be hanging out with him.
| Nami chapter 2 . 7/14
LOL, had a deja vu, this scene was so similar to how Dawn asked Ash out.
Poor Ash, you really know how to kick him while he's down LOL.
| Nami chapter 1 . 7/14
Aaah, poor Ash! At least he has Misty.
And wow, I can't believe he agreed to marry and have kids o_O
| unamed chapter 3 . 8/25/2013
I love story! Um But I really liked the first book Better