|Reviews for Wannabe|
| acciomysteriousbubbles chapter 1 . 9/19/2011
I really liked it but can you please use dragged instead of drug :P haha I'm a bot of a grammar nazi sorry :)
| Gamma Orionis chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
So, I have to say, I'm amazed that you were capable of putting words to a song that includes the line "I wanna really really really wanna zig-a-zig ha" into a story about Bellatrix. That alone is remarkable. Besides that, I liked your rebellious Bellatrix, she was really enjoyable to read about, and the recurring line "Ladies don't..." worked well with that. Also, I think you portrayed the relationship between her and Rodolphus really well - the only real reason she's interested in him being the Dark Lord.
There are a few places where the grammar seemed a little off, but nothing heinous. I did notice that you wrote "aparate" instead of "apparate", but that was the only spelling mistake I picked up.
Good job, and thanks for participating!
| GreenGirl111 chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
good job :)