|Reviews for Naruto: Kitsune Warrior|
| Guest chapter 2 . 11/17/2013
Child genius! Seriously... He is a fucking child genius
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/17/2013
Child genius! Lol
| THEHORORR chapter 8 . 10/4/2012
think i miss-spelled that...never mind. Anyways...crap I forgot what I was gonna say. Oh well I've put too much effort in typing this to just NOT send it. (sorry for the useless review)
| Ms-Miscellaneous-2021 chapter 1 . 3/9/2012
I'm only writing this review to help. Either take it or throw it away, but I just have to say:
You have a good beginning. I got hook to the story right away. Plus it's original, I've been dying to read some original plots.
Needs a little work on the dialogue. It needs to flow, at the moment it's... very... choppy. I guess that's the best description. It just sounds like words someone thought for an essay on a homework assignment, and not just two people talking.
Going to read the next chapter.
Thanks for the story
| Sevvus chapter 8 . 1/16/2012
but it was worth reading anyway...in fact it was good enough,if my laptop wasnt broken i would save it to read again another day...well i can always hope for it to finish someday :p
| Toby860 chapter 8 . 1/13/2012
a good story. i dislike the discontinuation but i will live with it. pairing should of been naru\haku or naru\akane,kyuubi. hinata just does not match
| yukinari chapter 8 . 12/29/2011
| avid reader chapter 8 . 12/26/2011
what why are you discontining the story. it is one of the best i have read so far i have read about 1000 naruto stories so far plz dont stop the story and if you do at least put it for adoption!
| RiP-Cynder chapter 8 . 12/26/2011
| gamerman5603 chapter 7 . 12/15/2011
update soon please
| Tikkeus chapter 2 . 11/25/2011
Ok, forget what I said earlier. Fluffines turned into dumbness, and it's no longer realistic enough to read.
| Tikkeus chapter 1 . 11/25/2011
Nii-san is elder brother. Younger is otouto (nee-san and imouto for sisters accordingly). A bit too fluffy for my taste: you'd normally expect Anko to be more suspicious and bitchy, not "let's be good friends" type; same with Kyuubi who suprisingly doesn't feel superior to mere mortals and outraged that one of them managed to control her and another - defeat. Still, it's good so far - sensible, something that I value and many fics lack.
| RiP-Cynder chapter 7 . 11/20/2011
Was not expecting that. Why did you bring Aktsuki into the picture so soon? I mean, yeah Naruto is WAY to smart for his age, even at age 4 hehe. but, Great story and I hope you come back to continue this.
| RiP-Cynder chapter 6 . 11/20/2011
This was a great chapter. I liked how you handled the Team management and Mizuki.
| RiP-Cynder chapter 5 . 11/20/2011
Wow. That was an awesome chapter. Mind if I copy that Darkness and Light thing? I like how it sounds. *im not a story writer, but I like quotes that I can put into forum signatures.*