|Reviews for Smoke Wisps|
| Painted Zebras chapter 30 . 1/25
Omg that was amazing! I loved every page!
| EmoMyusicFox chapter 30 . 1/12
I'm crying? Hahahah hahh ah a ha what're you talking about these aren't tears im just sweating from my eyes
| wangbutt chapter 30 . 1/8
This story was so beautiful. It made me momentarily hate two of my favorite mercs, had me whisper-shouting 'no' countless times and got pretty damn close in making me cry (which is quite the thing, I've only ever cried for one book my entire life), but it was so beautiful in that awful heartbreaking way. I'm going to try and think that this story ends up with a happy ending to try and suppress my agony with this. Thank you so much for writing such a beautiful piece and damn you in the nicest, most grateful way possible for absolutely breaking my heart. You are a beautiful writer.
| Girl Supersonicboy chapter 30 . 12/10/2014
Absolutely love this!
The ending made me sad.
But the story was over all fantastic!
I read this in one day!
Could not put it down
And now that its done i want to read it all again!
| wolfatthedoor chapter 30 . 11/21/2014
This was so beautifully written, I just had to tell you. The ending made me sad but, realistically, it's how such a sob story would end, I suppose. Thank you for writing such a wonderful story, anyway. :D
| The Majestic Phoenix chapter 30 . 10/14/2014
I liked your story. It was creative, and entertaining to read. I didn't like the ending, though. It's sad, to imagine the sniper settling for a woman that he isn't attracted to, and doesn't love. I can't imagine the woman the sniper settled for being satisfied in a loveless, passionless marriage, either. Regardless, I liked your story as a whole; thank you for sharing it.
| Renard chapter 30 . 9/25/2014
I really hoped it wouldn't have ended like this...I don't know if you will read this, but...Well, i absolutely loved the story, the style and how the characters have been brought out, but why did it have to end like that. Maybe i just read endings like this too often...It simply breaks my heart. The whole thing went so well and their romance seemed perfect. Goddamnit, i'm shaking. I think i'll need a bit to digest that, but thats fine, that just shows how good the story was, right? Thank you for the amazing fic, even if the ending made me shiver in sadness and frustration. Au revoir
| StonerBoyfriends chapter 30 . 9/12/2014
I've got a few, simple things to say.
Firstly- oh my god how could you end it like that I'm genuinly crying oh god.
Secondly- that was the best goddamn SniperSpy fanfiction I've ever read so thank you.
| Yuki chapter 22 . 8/18/2014
last 3 lines... Aanndd Nazi mode activated. lol
| InuToshio chapter 30 . 8/18/2014
aww, i want more! what happened to spy?!
| Soundgoodizer chapter 30 . 8/12/2014
how could you do this to me
| djsckatzen chapter 1 . 8/8/2014
You absolutely broke me. This was magnificent.
| Vasquez chapter 30 . 7/30/2014
| Anon chapter 30 . 4/10/2014
This is absolutely heartbreaking :')
| Meh chapter 30 . 4/6/2014
Great story. Shitty ending. I would've shanked the engie. Stupid asshole...