|Reviews for Smoke Wisps|
| Flaming Skulls chapter 30 . 3/3
Omg, to be honest, the end made me tear up. I'm just going to leave it to myself and assume Lawrence and Claude get back together and live happily ever after when the sniper spotted his face.
| TheMalevolentToaster chapter 30 . 2/17
Hohmahgawd this story was amazing!
I'm sorta sad now that I've finished reading it; it would be great if there was a sequel :3
| Twilight9852 chapter 30 . 2/2
Oh my god... This story... This story...
Mere words cannot describe the emotion this story made me feel. This was so beautifully written, on a much more emotional and mental level than most stories that I read.
The ending I took as that kind of open ending that you get to decide for yourself what happened and I love it. I favorite this story, definitely.
| Kopfkino chapter 30 . 1/31
You broke my heart. Thank you for this though, at first I thought spy and Sniper's relationship were a bit rushed... But it turned out great. Thank you for writing it.
| Kyo chapter 30 . 1/5
Okay. This fic right here? The best thing I've read lately. You managed to throw me from my state of fangirlish screaming to dry heaving. It was a hell of a ride, and I read the whole thing in one sitting. I am literally speechless right now. Speechless! I am so sorry I put off reading this for so long. Really, I applaude you.
Best of luck in your future endeavors and I keep bettering your fantastic prose.
| Worldsweaver chapter 30 . 12/25/2013
This is by far the best Team Fortress fan fiction I have ever read and probably will ever find.
Everything, from the naming of the chapters, to the characterization of each class, you have down to a T and wow, it really shows. I don't want to seem like I'm making this story out to be perfect, sure, there are a few grammatical and typographical errors here and there- but in comparison to most of the stuff on this website, you've really polished this nicely. I nearly cried at the end though, curse you and your excellent story telling ways.
| Nubblet chapter 30 . 9/17/2013
Loved this story, found it short and bittersweet :) Was expected more sadistic medic or a big finale show off at end but I still like the actual ending though I wish it was a bit happier
| Flamia chapter 30 . 7/23/2013
I don't even know why I keep reading stories that eventually leave me with the gooey slivers of my heart to scrape off the floor...but good god this was beautiful QQ
Also, fuck you Engie. Fuck you so hard with a rusty rake up the ass, I swear to god you'll never look the same to me.
| Guest chapter 30 . 6/12/2013
OH MY GOD. YOU ARE A FLIPPIN' GENIUS. SO MUCH LOVE FOR THIS STORY AND YOUR WRITING.
Wonderful. Simply wonderful. :D :D
| Justine Rane chapter 30 . 3/19/2013
It was really 't know what happened to the BLU Spy though
| siathedragon chapter 30 . 3/1/2013
noooo dont make it end so sad ,the story was awesome
| Guest chapter 30 . 2/19/2013
This physically hurt in the chest/heart area. Then again, I have many health problems there. But I feel that this has enhanced them. This story had me laughing at my phone for minutes on end, screaming at that fucker of a medic (and Engy at the very end), and sobbing grossly. Uh, ow, I still hurt. THE FEELS I CANNOT CONTAIN I'M WRITHING IN FEEEELS
| miss butterfly-lamb chapter 30 . 2/19/2013
I have no words right now, that was just. Wow.
| Discreetly Gleeful chapter 30 . 2/8/2013
This is my second read, and I nearly cried at the ending T_T
| GameElder3 chapter 1 . 1/28/2013