Reviews for Defective
julietsamuel chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
Hello my dear compliment ,i am juliet by name i will like you

to contact me through my private email adress()so that i will show you my pictures,please do not write me back here hope to read from you,

yours juliet
Blue Rogue Linds chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
Katanaaa, you can try to hide and change your name, but I still recognize your writing ANYWHERE. It's that awshum. :x

Kalas is so cute and pathetic here. I feel sorry for him...
Trajectory of Simplicity chapter 1 . 9/6/2011
This was amazing. The way you presented such a serious situation in the eyes of a toddler Kalas was ingenious. The way you voiced him was exactly as he should have been voiced: pure, innocent, and clear. Your sentence flow, the pacing, and the presentation of it all just really evoked a lot of emotion from me. Like, I can totally imagine Kalas strong and stubborn like that, even at such a tender age. And those last two lines really got to me.

Again, this was really great. I enjoyed every bit of it. Thanks so much for sharing :)