|Reviews for Halo|
| acciomysteriousbubbles chapter 1 . 9/19/2011
I love your stories so much but you need a beta I wold be happy to do it I just have to write another 2 stories...
| GreenGirl111 chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
Lily's response is so funny :) poor sirius though! he deserves her more than james!
| Gamma Orionis chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
I was hoping Sirius/Lily would factor into this! It's one of my favourite pairings, so that made me happy. Ahem, onto the actual review:
I really, really liked how well you incorporated the lyrics into the story. You did an absolutely amazing job with that, and it didn't feel the slightest bit contrived. You did a very good job with Lily as well. I like that we see her through Sirius's eyes instead of having her actually present, because that way the "angelic" personality feels like it's partly Sirius's interpretation instead of just a fact about her. I felt really sad for Sirius by the end too, so you're obviously doing that right.
I honestly just loved this. It was so touching and sad, the imagery was great, and the use of the song was just brilliant. Wonderful work.