Reviews for Hot Commodity
snowtiger1 chapter 2 . 9/12/2011
im loving it so far, really hope Bella makes it really really hard work for him. I like a fiesty BELLA give him a run for his money thats what i say. but with a few laughs along the way,
Chloe Masen chapter 2 . 9/11/2011
"My hair got pulled, my ass got slapped... " LUCKY BEEEEEYOTCH! I'm so jealous...

Now... breakfast was HILARIOUS.

But moving on to the really important things... Edward seeing the headline-priceless. Edward in the shower... His hand is great... love his 'visual' of her... HOT... but next time... I'd like to offer him MY MOUTH. And I'm not in the least bit ashamed about that. Nope. Not one bit.

I adore you. I adore your writing. And I ADORE YOUR EDWARD. EDWARDS. BOTH OF THEM. *bows to all three of you* But you in a different way than them...

Bawahahaha... I kill myself...
pillow912 chapter 2 . 9/11/2011
great chapters
Yebabb79 chapter 2 . 9/11/2011
cant wait for next update
dazzleglo chapter 2 . 9/11/2011
Definitely would love outtakes. Oh Edward, you are heading down a slippery slope, lol.
ADADancer chapter 2 . 9/11/2011
Great chapter.
WonkeyDonkey chapter 2 . 9/11/2011
Great story so far.
rachel000 chapter 2 . 9/11/2011
interesting so far...
hooker81 chapter 2 . 9/11/2011
Stay strong Bella :)
Scorpio11 chapter 2 . 9/11/2011
I just happened upon this today, and I'm really enjoying it. I think Edward will have of a challenge than he thinks, but Bella's to preoccupied with him to resist for long. But I suspect the love felt won't be one sided.
ethelouise chapter 2 . 9/11/2011
Fun story so far. I love a cocky Edward amd a Bella who can put Edward in his place! I look forward to your updates.
Chloe Masen chapter 1 . 9/8/2011
You can have me, Mr. Cullen, and the only thing you have to put up is your cock. And I'll help you with that.

Thank you, my blue-eyed brilliant one, it is an honor to be permitted to frolic amongst your words. And you are most welcome. xoxo
ADADancer chapter 1 . 9/6/2011
I like it so far.
dazzleglo chapter 1 . 9/6/2011
I like this already, oh cocky Edward is going to be so much fun and if Jasper gets in with Alice, he's going to be able to work the inside track against him.
fanfic2 fanatic2 chapter 1 . 9/6/2011
I'm hooked...
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