Reviews for Lost in Revision
JBubbles chapter 15 . 7/5/2014
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salus gem chapter 15 . 1/12/2013
This is utterly amazing! You are such a talented writer and Harry and Neville seem so completely rounded in their characterisation. My only issue with it was how dependent on Neville Harry the boks he was pretty reliant on Ron too but in forth year when they fell out Harry got angry with it and not despondent.

Still, brilliant trough and through and the reoccuring plot lines that wove in and out were lovely. How strange is it that I also like Time personified? It was lovely, and it wasn't overpwoering at all like it usually is in other fics. Fab job!
DobbyLovesSocks chapter 1 . 12/15/2012
...Loved the ending to this chapter. It was a really interesting play on the story... hehe. This is really well written, and you characterized everyone really well. Nice work.
domsijohn chapter 15 . 4/15/2012
i just can't see why ginny could have the other 4 children before she died
domsijohn chapter 14 . 4/15/2012
poor harry should tell his boss to stick his job up his ass i hate that they guy suffer
domsijohn chapter 13 . 4/15/2012
poor harry should tell his boss to stick his job up his ass
domsijohn chapter 12 . 4/15/2012
poor ginny
domsijohn chapter 11 . 4/15/2012
i so love this but i still think that harry and nev should have their other 4 children albus severus lily luna and nev two girls
domsijohn chapter 10 . 4/15/2012
yeah james
domsijohn chapter 9 . 4/15/2012
yeah getting married
domsijohn chapter 8 . 4/15/2012
this is so good
domsijohn chapter 7 . 4/15/2012
how sweet
domsijohn chapter 6 . 4/15/2012
poor nev
domsijohn chapter 5 . 4/15/2012
nev poor nev
domsijohn chapter 4 . 4/15/2012
ginny just went up in my eyes
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