|Reviews for Target|
| Guest chapter 10 . 1/17
Wow does John have the super ata gene or what. I'm glad that they got that device out of him and that he was able to stop the virus and save the men in the jumper that in space. I really liked this story. Please write more.
| Guest chapter 10 . 9/21/2013
Nice end with the connection to Iron Man and the kidnapping of Rodney and Daniel Jackson that time! This was a great story hon which I enjoyed very much indeed! Thank you!
| Guest chapter 9 . 9/21/2013
On the way home at last for the lazing around part John wanted earlier! Yeay!
| Guest chapter 8 . 9/21/2013
John is working so hard at helping Rodney when suddenly it seems like Silpa's ploy worked as Atlantis tries to make contact! Oh no! I love John's connection with Atlantis and his ability to use the ATA gene, even though it does get him in trouble!
| Guest chapter 7 . 9/21/2013
Teyla wil not be pleased when she discovers Silpa's treachery! Sheppard was as brave as we expected when under the knife...and the humor remained intact also. Good chapter hon. Thanks.
| Guest chapter 6 . 9/21/2013
Pulo has the ATA gene! And a machine got a hold of him? And the machine wants he people with the ATA gene...ok, now we know what's going on even though the only thing we know about the machine is just that...it's a machine!
I hope Ronon is ready to hold Sheppard...trust him to want the thing out quickly to save his men in space. Teyla was good at getting info from Pulo and I loved the marine who liked her technique!
| Guest chapter 5 . 9/21/2013
So now we know it's more than a dart in him...he's a human transmitting machine! If any of his people die in the jumper stranded in space, John will never forgive himself!
| Guest chapter 4 . 9/21/2013
Great chapter again hon. So Sheppard has to have field surgery because he could be bobby-trapped. Of course, our man is the first to not want to go back to Atlantis as Sheppard always puts the safety of his people first ahead of his own. 'Iron Man'...injured and drugged, he can still joke!
| Guest chapter 3 . 9/21/2013
Gone one minute...then not gone! Boy, this chapter had the reader's emotions moving up and down quickly...running off to read the next chapter at high speed to keep up here!
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/21/2013
A large blob has John! And he's in pain while everyone is desperately trying to find him! Keep strong John! With Rodney and Carter in the search team, they will get you...eventually!
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/21/2013
I don't remember ever reading this before but I don't know how I missed it! But at least it's the weekend so I have the time to read it! Great start. Lots of reasons to continue...to find out how whumped Sheppard is, to find out what took him down and who and to find out where he is! Thanks for this chapter hon!
| Harmne chapter 10 . 3/26/2013
Ahhh! Is there a sequel to this? Not a very nice place to leave us hanging!
Great story, though. I was glued to my computer, and in too much of a rush to get to the next part to be very good at reviewing the individual chapters. Sorry! But great story!
| Harmne chapter 8 . 3/26/2013
I hope Teyla gets to beat the crap out of the sniveling Silpa...or scare him half to death and let Ronan finish him off - with Rodney loudly berating him for being a coward - in the public marketplace - while it happens! (LOL, I'm not vindictive at all...)
| JewelsGlow15 chapter 10 . 8/29/2012
Just wanted to say that I think this is one of the best SGA stories out there.
| Peridot5 chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
This was a great story. I loved…well, pretty much all of it. There were some great twists. Oh, and Carter! Love Carter! She was kinded of underused when she on the show for whatever reason, I think anyway. Good stuff.