Reviews for Broken
Renndude chapter 1 . 9/11/2014
Hell yeah Toph is so badass. Her personality is closest to Korra's and initially I didn't like Lin because I thought she was a stick in the mud, but then I realised Lin just inherited Toph's "stubborn as all hell" personality and Su her "rebel" side. Both are awesome
Snugglesthefluffykitten chapter 1 . 7/12/2014
FANTASTIC!
Since this is a one-shot, what would have been in store for them at the serpent's pass? Just curious.
BG-13 chapter 1 . 10/28/2013
Note to self: Some small errors in character and grammar but... not bad
J. Jonah jameson chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
"She look up into the ember eyes of her captor"...

"She LOOKED up..."

Toph's regained her sense of sight! Huzzah!
ManiacMily chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
I knew it! Toph can't sell them out.
Speedy08 chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
O.o! wow, nice going aang and toph!
TezTra chapter 1 . 9/12/2011
Is it wrong that I have rediscovered my respect for Azula? I mean, you have to hand it to her for being able to keep up manipulating, killing and plotting against peeps all while looking great... *sigh* Oh Aang, if only you knew 'bout the things Toph does for you... *shakes head sadly* All in all, however, great piece of writing *musters smile*

Happy Days!

TezTra
RogueRecruit chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
this is amazing, please please please continue xxx