Reviews for European Front
Eagle2 chapter 1 . 4/30/2012
Nice story, it was cool to see the what was happening in other countries during the war. Keep up the writing, you will only get better with practice.
a german chapter 1 . 3/21/2012
the correct german translations of your two sentences

"Der Ausländer ist angriff unsere stellung! Wir brauche Luft Unterstützung Jetzt!"

Instead you should use this:

"Die Aliens greifen unsere Stellungen an! Wir brauchen sofort Luftunterstützung!"

and for that one

"Bist du Gesund? Was brauchst du?"

you should use:

"Sind sie verletzt? Brauchen sie Hilfe?"
Jo chapter 1 . 9/22/2011
Really enjoyed this, please continue it :D
IAmTheStars chapter 1 . 9/6/2011
This was an awesome read and I enjoyed it immensely. :) It was suspenseful and felt realistic. (well, except for the aliens bit :) I've heard that ejecting was incredibly pailful and some people may never be able to fly again because if they had to eject again it could do major damage to their spine. But anyway, I didn't spot any mistakes (score!) and I'm super excited and can't wait for the next story! :D Keep writing! Your fantastic! :D

-IAmTheStars