|Reviews for Smile|
| Fourmille d'idees chapter 1 . 12/28/2011
Wow... That was kinda dark. Love it :)
Neville was kind of creepy, but isn't that what hear-break does to you? I'd feel really sorry for Luna if it wasn't for the fact that she ripped his heart out, and apparently, more than once.
It made it kind of, powerful I guess, how you put the lyrics in at the end Perfect lyrics too. And I loved Luna's "explanation" of why she actually wasn't cheating on him.
| Gamma Orionis chapter 1 . 9/6/2011
Wow, Neville was pretty creepy in this O.O I suppose that's pretty much requisite for this song, though, so I definitely understand. I liked Luna's rationale for why she wasn't actually cheating on Neville, and I felt really sorry for her towards the end, and good work distributing the lyrics between Luna and Neville in a way that made sense and fit with the song. The grammar also seems a lot better in this than in a few of the other pieces you've written, so there's definite improvement going on. Very creepy, very powerful. Good work!
| GreenGirl111 chapter 1 . 9/6/2011
I love that song, and this fic really fits it