Reviews for Bolt's First Secret Admirer
backupwriter chapter 16 . 2/9/2015
same guy as last time. I just respectfully ask that I get credit if you use my idea and other than that anyone else reading in 2015? if so then please back me up on my ideas because I think there rather decent and fitting with the current story and on a side note - if you use my arc idea - after Sadie gets pregnant she could be out for a walk with mia asking for advice and such when a pound patrol gets them and at the same time bolt is busy trying to fend of hunter with they are fighting and both stop to the hear the distress and hunter tries to go after them bolt stops him and warns that they will just get caught so they basically do some sneak in and save them stunt - like in the movie - but bolt however is in bad shape from the fight and has hunters teeth marks on his snout and he can barley walk - front left leg bitten and bleeding like ER level of bleeding and hunter tries to get him home and penny and her boyfriend are walking down the street - leave house for walk - and sees them. - hunter with blood dripping from teeth - and bolt has one hell of a paw swipe on his left eye to - the boyfriend asks what happened and penny nearly faints at the sight of him bolt through major internal wounds and hemrage explains what happened and hunter - holding bolt up - tries to say sorry but bolt pushes off hem and tries to limp after the pound van but passes out from trauma and blood loss and he wakes up on a intensive care unit at the vets office with penny and boyfriend asleep and gets up but still numb from pain killers. as he limps down the hall he hears whimpering and finds hunter witch is about to be put down sorry bro that's all I got please tell me in a A/N if you like these ideas and please give me credit thanks :x3 - cat with whiskers
backup writer chapter 16 . 2/9/2015
more please I love the story arc and I want more of your brilliance and for you to carry on. also if you got writers block try a story arc like this. chapter 17 bolt and Sadie mate - please add all detail during it to emphasize on their love -. chapter 18 and then the chapter after that she gets pregnant and her brother lashes on bolt. its not much but I hope it helps
Guest chapter 16 . 1/25/2015
I like it keep up the good work
Guest chapter 16 . 2/25/2014
well dude this was epic I also played the songs when you said or tslked about them and I also think that you should do more peace
davisboy chapter 13 . 2/7/2013
lol, i like the way u do the anonymous voice, it makes me laugh every time.

agn same message as last time
davisboy chapter 12 . 2/7/2013
yes, i like how u mention ur self as the writer

agn same message as a while back
davisboy chapter 11 . 2/7/2013
lol, i liked the audience comment there at the end,
davisboy chapter 8 . 2/7/2013
yay:) bolt does rock, altho i dont really like cllifhanger's ill let this one slip,

agn same message as last time,
davisboy chapter 7 . 2/7/2013
lol, the last part was a bit funny, though i think u could have made it a bit better by making it a bit more, actionish/funnyish?, wat ever u want to call it.

anyway other than that it is a pretty good story
tnx for writing,
davisboy chapter 6 . 2/5/2013
again, great story, problly 1 of the only storys ive read that i believe could actually happen. also, i dont normally review, so i read but dont review alot. yes i know this is a oldish fanfic, but i think if u brushed up the grammer and the small details u could actually get people to read it again as if it were brand new, not saying its not good, just saying its not on the NEW board, if u know wat i mean.

again tnx for writing
davisboy chapter 2 . 2/5/2013
Very nice, its probly 1 of the only fanfics ive read that sounds like it coul actually happen.

good work & tnx for writing
Dead Wolf Walking chapter 16 . 10/24/2012
What the Hell... did you just put your self on the story?
Man, you did speak too much

Anyway, CLIFFHANGER! man you're so smart on where to put it.
Dead Wolf Walking chapter 15 . 10/24/2012
Dead Wolf Walking chapter 11 . 10/24/2012
arrghh... another Cliffhanger! I hate Cliffhanger. You're so smart on where to put it
anyway, I'd Like your story dude, haha... YOU ROCK!
Dead Wolf Walking chapter 8 . 10/24/2012
ahh... Cliffhanger! you're so smart when to put it
Anyway, I like your story. YOU ROCK BRO!
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