Reviews for Stolen Dreams
TrulyOutrageous chapter 1 . 10/12/2011
I was on the Fictionator's site for Teaser Mondays and the tease I was reading was by your tease for this story and I read it and then I saw your name and realized you wrote TAM and that I hadn't put you on Author Alert. This is a great first chapter and I can't wait until I am all caught up.
janshanr chapter 6 . 10/12/2011
I definitely thunk his parents were in on it.
Samayi67 chapter 6 . 10/12/2011
Love it update soon!
77049sma chapter 6 . 10/12/2011
Woooo! Get it! Hahaha... Poor bella tho she's all confused
lettywilson chapter 6 . 10/12/2011
Glad bellas and Edward had there little fight.. bella was right, Edward in a way was keeping her as a secret which wasn't right. have told his parents from the start. They still work on themselves as a relationship before trying to add in a 10yr son that has no idea he is there's. Keep the updates coming!
girassol31 chapter 6 . 10/12/2011
How could you leave it there? You're evil lol. Loved the chapter, so glad they are "better". And that question, I've been asking that myself.
foxylady1on1 chapter 6 . 10/12/2011
so the plot thickens?,Ed snr has to have had something to do with Ryan,maybe not his mother but DEFF his father.

When the whole truth comes out lets see who is standing at the end of it.

update soon love it xxx
archy12 chapter 6 . 10/12/2011
um yes,i still think Edward's parents,or at least his father,did have something to do with would Dr Gerandy do it otherwise?

Bella has a point needs a stable home,and the Cullens love it will be better not to go to the court and reach a compromise?he should know that Bella and Edward are his real parents,and they can visit him whenever they wish thing is to go slowly.
stageart chapter 6 . 10/12/2011
They have some difficult decisions to make. I am interested to see exactly how Edward's parents were involved in Ryan's kidnapping. As always I try to wait patiently for more answers, not!
MaCherieAmour chapter 6 . 10/11/2011
This is like reading a Lifetime movie script. Stolen babies, deceptions and the like.

But I'm seeing a huge plot hole here that doesn't make sense.

Earlier in the story Bella mentioned when she goes back to Forks she had to hear the whispers about the poor Chief's daughter who got knocked up then lost the baby. So the word through the town grapevine is that Edward Masen and Bella Swan's baby died.

From the beginning HOW is it possible as a nurse and citizen of Forks, Susan Mallory didn't hear those whispers. Mrs. Stanley is Jessica's mom I'm assuming so she and Susan should be of the same age and talk as town neighbors and such. How did a gossip mouth not tell Susan about the poor heartbreak of the Chief's daughter?

Susan would have been saying "No, Edward and Bella gave the baby up for adoption"

Something is very fishy here about that.
Twiheart1901EC chapter 6 . 10/11/2011
Jeez this just keeps on getting even more dramatic. I love it! I can't for the next update, I hope it's coming soon.
NikkylovesBD chapter 6 . 10/11/2011
HOLY SHIT! The plot thickens! OMG this is such a good story!
vampiregurl chapter 6 . 10/11/2011
i love bella's ways of thinking. she's careful and considerate. yes, the baby was stolen from them. if i were edward, i would have taken full custody, after all the baby was taken from them without any permission whatsoever. in this case, i would do some thinking first like bella. they aren't married or even stable yet. to bring up a child would need stability. unless they moved in together or got married then maybe. but really, take full custody but allow visitation rights to them too.
Twifan1228 chapter 6 . 10/11/2011
You don't need to hide sugar. Ed Masen should hide though ..

Great chapter
gitgit chapter 6 . 10/11/2011
snap

welll that was definitely interesting

i cant wait to see what the implications will be for this after

everytime

major masen makes me freaking swoon

:D
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