|Reviews for Undisclosed Desires|
| Edward's my obsession1971 chapter 1 . 10/17/2011
Loved it and I don't normally read one shots. Good job!
| momma2fan chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
That was HOT! Loved it..Do you think you might extend it?
| puzzypower chapter 1 . 10/12/2011
SO good! Interesting twist at the end :D
| BlackImprint chapter 1 . 10/7/2011
Loved it! And the twist at the end? Simply awesome! Great work :D
| fanfichardcore chapter 1 . 10/5/2011
I loved this. These role playing type stories are one of my favorites. This one was done especially well. I really liked adding Alice and Jasper into the mix (without actually adding them). Very good.
| kittiekatz34 chapter 1 . 9/28/2011
that was hawt... need more...
| dohagrl chapter 1 . 9/22/2011
hot o/s...good luck!
| TeamPattinson chapter 1 . 9/14/2011
WoW that was soooOo good! That's always so much fun to play like