Reviews for L I F E
Guest chapter 1 . 4/5/2015
The grammar is good enough, the storyline is good, but Trini is a really one dimensional- Hate to say this- Mary Sue.

She is good at almost anything, and she has all the powers in the world. If you really wanted to do that, she could have some prominent weaknesses.
Also, her relationships damage the canon. Almost everyone agrees with her and she's right .
Her parents abusing her? PLEASE.. Yes, Chase was abused but his continued character development. Trini's was just to make the reader sympathize.
Go ahead, pull my hair. But Mary Sue is a fairly subjective term, and this flame may be used (is it a flame?) to cook your dinner.
Guest chapter 12 . 7/9/2014
I think you do GREAT description with this. "as if it were poison on her lips." That is awesome.
erica.phoenix16 chapter 53 . 3/2/2013
erica.phoenix16 chapter 52 . 1/15/2013
Please update!
Jangonara chapter 48 . 7/31/2012
Yes, you should!
Great chapter, as usual!
Jangonara chapter 47 . 7/31/2012
I AM! This story makes me SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO happy!
Jangonara chapter 40 . 7/29/2012
Lol, great chapter, but the last line is a little messed up.
Cmdr. Gen. Marasco chapter 37 . 7/28/2012
Oh ho...Chase, you slippery bastard. Very nice.
Cmdr. Gen. Marasco chapter 33 . 7/26/2012
Kinda saw this coming, honestly. Was hoping he'd have a cooler death though. Blegh. I'll take it.
newsiesgirllaces chapter 27 . 7/25/2012
You write spidey perfectly! :D
newsiesgirllaces chapter 26 . 7/24/2012
I have only read a few Runaways issues, but i hope to find some more. :) Great story so far!
Jangonara chapter 12 . 7/24/2012
I love this story, but i wanted to ask, Who's scavenger?

Lucy stood up and wrapped her arms around her; holding her tight as she slowly began to cry.

"Can we just skip to the end?" Bruiser said quietly.

"Seriously," Talkback agreed. "What more do we need to know. Everything they've done is in that book and that's MORE than enough to lock our parents up."

"So we take this down to the LAPD then?" (Scavenger asked.)

Do you mean Predator?
Cmdr. Gen. Marasco chapter 25 . 7/24/2012
Heh. Glad to see you did finally update this. So now Trini's turning into an Angel from Maximum Ride. Nice. Bird girl lovin' woo.
Now I just need to do more RR...
Inifinite-Bit chapter 24 . 1/15/2012
Ok i'm going to run off a check list of all the powers Trini has so far and correct me if I missed any.

1. Psychokinesis(sounds more badass than Telekinesis)

2. Telepathy

3. Healing factor

4. Healing touch

5. Enhanced senses

6. Clairvoyance

7. Pyrokinesis

8. Tactile psychokinesis(Could explain the super strength and flying.)

9. Teleportation


Anyway i'm digging this story keep up the good work. Also have you ever heard of Avengers Academy?
Summer-chan chapter 24 . 12/18/2011
The first time I read this was freashman year of high school and I still can't beleave that you are the only one smart enough to make a story like this work

Im only 16 too this sucks

I can't even finish one fanfic without going haywire

Primus better be listening because god is screwing me over

Well seeing some gammitorial errors not alot though

Keep it up
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