|Reviews for Thorough|
| cfigueroa78 chapter 3 . 1/19
I really love all your stories. My favorite is Prey for the Wicked but I also really love your different takes and restructuring on certain parts of the SM series. And they are very significant parts from the series - Bella's doomed birthday for example. I loved how you wrote how things would have been if taken in a different direction. What I appreciate the most is that you create more realistic feelings and thoughts of the characters. I love the SM series but I think she really overlooked real human emotions, responses and frustrations - it always felt like she just glossed over very crucial things. What teenager would not be frustrated that her boyfriend can barely french-kiss her, let alone have sex? What young woman wouldn't feel unresolved fears before marrying a man who once left her heartbroken? I just immensely enjoy and appreciate how you tell your stories. I can't wait for updates on Prey and I know it's on hiatus for now. I really hope you're doing okay and will be back with us soon.
| MildredDempsey chapter 10 . 8/25/2013
Oh, this story is so deeply satisfying in a way no other honeymoon story has been. It's sweetness and passion, balanced perfectly.
| Guest chapter 3 . 6/16/2013
I could totally hear Edward, only hotter!
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/16/2013
I really do love how you write!
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/16/2013
I found this through PFW so far is really funny!
| TheMashley24 chapter 10 . 5/16/2013
"Her laugh is sweet, and I can almost feel the effort she is making to push past her insecurities. I love her more in this moment than I ever thought possible."
My favorite line from this chapter! I absolutely love the way you write your Edward. I regret ensuring so long to read this. Because it didn't have a complete status, and having been updated in a while I assumed it was still a WIP. I'm so glad I was wrong! Awesome story. Very true to character. I love that despite nerves and their fear they were still able to be playful. This story was so effing HOT.
Good job ma'am ;)
| Siriusmunchkin chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
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| nitsuAPJ chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
Hey I get to review again for this story! I'm so glad you re posted this I didn't understand why you took it off to begin with? This is a wonderful story!
| sissyb chapter 10 . 10/23/2012
Absolutely perfect, what an amazing story!
| Doubleamom chapter 10 . 10/20/2012
Such a beautiful story! I love the end, very well done !
| hayleymills chapter 10 . 4/13/2012
I dont even think I can put it into words how good this was.
| MiZpamier chapter 10 . 3/22/2012
this story is epic, really.
| Julia-S77 chapter 10 . 3/22/2012
This was such a wonderful and very hot and sensual wedding night!
Great chapter, loved it.
Thought this story was wonderful especially if it was your first fan fiction story. Xx
| Julia-S77 chapter 9 . 3/22/2012
All Edwards worrying about the blood was for nothing. Loved how he had thought of everything to make it as good as possible for bella.
Great chapter, loved it xx
| Julia-S77 chapter 8 . 3/22/2012
So glad Edward has reached an epiphany regarding the wedding night.
Great chapter, loved it xx