|Reviews for Upon the Slate|
| Ophelia Meadows chapter 21 . 9/25/2013
I really loved this so far. I hope you pick it back up soon. :) Thanks for writing and I hope there will be another update.
| SerenDPetty chapter 21 . 3/27/2013
Well that was wonderful.
Well researched, well plotted, well written.
A few places with spelling errors that spell check can't catch because the words were correctly spelled but incorrect for the sentence, but otherwise a marvelous work of fiction.
Thank you for a voyage through Rose and John's firsts. I was sorry to see it end so soon.
The next few would have to be First Childbirth (when Rose carries to term properly [I vote it's a girl, so Ethan gets a sister]), First Date (for Ethan), First Date (for their daughter [and wouldn't it be interesting to see how Doctor-daddy reacts to that!]) First Marriage (either child), First Grandchild, First Death. (After all, eventually even they will die. Whether it's Rose or the Doctor, the other will have to deal with the loss.) And since you have a new TARDIS growing in their back yard, that adds the options of First Time Trip, and First Temporal Adventure to the list. I'm sure you have a list of your own.
I have to commend your imagination.
Please keep writing.
| grednforgesgirl chapter 21 . 2/9/2013
First time one of them comes home drunk! I LOVE this story, btw! You're brilliant! 3
| Louise chapter 18 . 1/11/2013
Great story, im really enjoying it, it's extremely well written and the story is great! I was just wondering about the whole "he's severely allergic to aspirin" part because i've seen this in many people's stories, where are you getting this from? Is it a part of the actual dr who story?
| foodandbooksandthings chapter 21 . 10/7/2012
That is what this is.
The ending of series four was so utterly heart breaking for me. I felt so conflicted with Rose staying with 10 duplicate and my heart hurt so badly for 10 himself. I just... It makes me cry. Every time.
It was like... I desperately wanted her with 10, but 10 duplicate was better for her and I just... SO MANY FEELINGS.
But this story here... I feel that this is really what could've happened. I think you captured everything so perfectly. It's a story that I'm so utterly happy with, and because of this fanfic, I've been able to accept Rose and 10 Duplicate. It's so... Just... The first couple of chapters literally made me cry. This is pretty much flawless.
Will you put in something with the original doctor? Maybe have him see them or something? I know it probably doesn't go with your one shot series, but I was just wondering. I know you wrote one with Eleven seeing Rose with the Human Doctor again, but I think it'd be fantastic to see John and Rose's feelings or something.
But anywhoo, this is so utterly perfect. I am so glad I found this.
| Rik chapter 21 . 10/4/2012
:O More please? I love this I was very saddened to see that chapter 21 was the last one! Do continue 3
| Atrilial chapter 15 . 7/30/2012
Ok, ignore my last review. Chapter 15 makes it all fit beautifully.
| Atrilial chapter 10 . 7/30/2012
I'm really loving this story so far, but I have to chime in in agreement about your whole time lord physiology thing not making much sense. When the Master looked into the time vortex when he was 8, he definitely looks like an 8-year-old child. I suspect they probably age - at least physically - sort of normally up to a point. I don't think it's really necessary to say that the Doctor CAN'T have sex to say he hasn't in a long, long time. I think our society today puts a bit to much importance on sex (not that it isn't important). I certainly think it's feasible to say that he just hasn't for centuries for lack of desire, availability, what-have-you. He's certainly already inclined to put up barriers and keep his distance from people. But that's just my thoughts. Regardless, there are definitely children on Gallifrey. Still, I really do love this story so far. This is the only thing that really bugged me.
| alreadytorn chapter 21 . 7/13/2012
Can you do a "First Visit to the School" for Rose? I just really love everything you've written and I think the first time Dr. Smith's wife visits him at work would be the cutest thing!
| Elle Obermeyer chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
This story is all and more that a story about Rose and Metacrisis Doctor. I read a Rose and Ten2 story a few weeks ago, and they immediatly started called Ten2 John. Which bothered me, a bit. But, with your story its nice because you ease all the 'firsts' in very nicely, and though I don't totally like it..I don't mind Ten2 going by John. Which now thinking about it, I probably shouldn't let that bother me, because hey! Rose is happy, and thats all I care about. I was sad when Rose lost the baby..but I was amazed by how much you know about the tech of the Doctor and Time Lords. I really liked how Ethan joined into the family. Its perfect, because as you said in a way in the story to outsiders the Tyler/Smith household looks rather domestic, but on the inside its so much..SO MUCH, more than domestic. its perfect. Your writing is so great. I think my favorite part of the story is the times that John goes Doctor. They are so..exciting. Thank you soo much for writing this its so great. Funny 'first' idea: First Movie, or TV show. It would be interesting to see that as a first. :)
| WhovianTitanPotter chapter 21 . 5/29/2012
This is fantastic! I absolutely love the story and it's progress! Keep up the amazing work!
| Brazen Wulf chapter 6 . 5/24/2012
*gush* that was so sweet and steamy at the same time! I love it :D again you did a great job! You writing is also very well done, it reads like a real scene with great characterization and dialogue. I can't wait to read more.
| Brazen Wulf chapter 5 . 5/24/2012
I'm absolutely adoring this fanfic so far. I think you capture all the characters well and I'm really enjoying watching these two discover all their firsts! Great job :)
| evilspoofauthorCassi chapter 21 . 5/16/2012
very nice job, i love it, pls make more soon. :)
| Elphie Bubble chapter 21 . 5/8/2012
I just read this whole story and I'm loving it! Wonderful writing! I'll be keeping an eye out for updates. :)