|Reviews for Written in the Stars|
| Adamzgal chapter 1 . 3/21
Very beautiful and different. I'm surprised I had missed this one. Luckily I found it on an Aragorn/Legolas rec list :)
| thunderstorm-skald chapter 1 . 4/18/2014
ITS SO FLUFFY IM GONNA DIE!
| Black-servant chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
Your story was very beautiful. I liked it a lot and I especially loved your lyrics, they were magical.
| hawkeyeforever chapter 1 . 5/17/2013
This was beautiful...Happy Writing;)
| Gunner'sDream chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
I'll just say that I'm thrilled you got 'carried away' with the whole song thing :) It was quite brilliant and original. And a beautiful song. Truly, I loved the song, it's presence in the fic between Legolas and Aragorn and the entire fic itself! I will honestly tell you that this is one of my favorite A/L fics that I have read, if not my absolute favorite. I love it! Truly awesome job. :)
| tbdeleted chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
Your writing is wonderful and I think the very idea of his heart only hearing Legolas' song is beautiful. The song is actually perfect too, I was completely enraptured with those lyrics. It was just so amazingly touching and... Well I really don't know what other word to use besides beautiful. I LOVE this pairing and I think you write them perfectly in character. Thank you for this, really.
| lu chapter 1 . 1/10/2012
Thank you so much for this story. The reviewcount first made me wonder whether the story was worth reading, but wow! It's such a cute little story, though absolutely awesome. I really loved to see both main charas so much ic although it is a slash fic. The style you write in is also quite amazing, especially since you don't need smut to make the characters' relationship progress. (Quite an achievement - most people here need vile means as that or even rape to come up with an explaination for the charas' relationship-.-')Please keep writing like this! Thanks again for this magnificent story.
| Archiril chapter 1 . 11/14/2011
It's quit beautiful, though I'm not that kind of person who likes the fics about Legolas and Aragorn as lovers. However, i liked reading it, tough you really should pay attention to your points at the end of a sentence ;)
| Hell's Angel-Heaven's Demon chapter 1 . 11/12/2011
I loved this idea ) That he can only hear one song and it is Legolas ehehe so cute! And i am glad for the happy ending! They deserve to be together! And amazing lyrics, by the way!
| Vamp.Michelle chapter 1 . 10/8/2011
I really like the idea of using a (silent) song to connect Aragorn and Legolas and make that something of a palpable proof of their love. It worked wonderfully, and I don't think it was overdone at all. This story could use a lot more punctuation, though - the sentences tend to run into each other when there's no full stop to keep them apart.
| Prince Legolas chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
It's been quite a while since I've read a beautiful, well written story such as this. I congratulate you. You've made me cry.
Hannon lle for this story, mellon.
| Aralas chapter 1 . 9/7/2011
Time lines got a wee bit confusing, but it is a good first effort and I really enjoyed the story. Thanks for writing and keep it up!
| Nessie-san chapter 1 . 9/7/2011
I agree - If you'd put the smut in, it would have felt...not as truthful, I guess. Also, unless Arwen had already produced his heir (which I doubt, as you said this takes place soon after ROTK), it probably would not have been accepted. I mean...unless they both agreed upon a child to name heir and raise as their son (which could happen, of course), there would have been no heir to the thrown...'Course, I like this pairing anyway, so who really cares XD Awesome job on this, although there were a lot of grammatical errors. Most of them were run-on sentences and comma splices, and you had one place where you misused a semi-colon...(can't remember where...), but the spelling was all impeccable, and you used a wide range of words (which people often don't :/). It was very well written, despite all the run-ons and comma splices - Good job, Rokutokyu-san - (Translation: Sixbynine -)