|Reviews for Heaven's Fault|
| DarkElucidator chapter 3 . 5/17
| FanFicReader712012 chapter 3 . 2/24
That was a fun chapter to read.
| FanFicReader712012 chapter 2 . 2/24
It is really great that Foxy Caster is Shirou's Servant, at least you are not making the story predictable.
| FanFicReader712012 chapter 1 . 2/24
| VanitasTheFool.1 chapter 3 . 1/9
op idea (love halo and fate/stay)
| Telron chapter 2 . 6/14/2014
YOU MUST UPDATE NOW! This story is still so good and epically awesome to read. It would be awesome to see how Shirou breaks the grail war due to his skill set.
| Telron chapter 3 . 3/19/2014
LOL poor shirou. i look forward to the next chapter if it ever comes out.
| ThePizziaMan chapter 3 . 3/18/2014
Its a shame you haven't updated in a while. This is a great story.
| Law77 chapter 3 . 12/21/2013
| kopakanuvafan20 chapter 3 . 10/4/2013
So Shirou is Noble Six. If his MJOLNIR armor is in one of the crates, I would love to see the other servants reaction to Shirou wearing it.
| Deathwatch Razgriz chapter 3 . 7/2/2013
I know I might come off as a fanboy with this comment, but I have to know...Is Saber going to be in this fic at all, and if so is she going to be paired with Shirou? If you already answered those questions then feel free to ignore those. Other than that I'm looking forward to more.
| Dragon VS Phoenix chapter 3 . 3/5/2013
As a wise man once said "Fucking hell this is damn intresting" and i have to say i believe him.
| GUEST chapter 3 . 3/2/2013
More chapters please and thank you.
| Guest chapter 3 . 2/25/2013
update fast! it is so interesting! i wonder who summon saber if caster is shirou's...
| Zaralann chapter 3 . 11/13/2012