Reviews for The Envelope
kreukje chapter 1 . 11/28/2014
This is indeed very sad. But i like it anyway!
Hoperise chapter 1 . 6/20/2014
"His hearts tightened."

Yeah, Dave is absolutely a Time Lord. So that is accurate spelling. :]

This was a beautiful rendition of a very likely possibility. I definitely thought this was the way the show was gonna go. While I don't know if as a father he would have told the kids right away, it's still a heartwarming reaction. Well done, you.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/31/2014
Write more please!
TallDarkAndHandsome chapter 1 . 1/3/2014
OMG YOU ARE SO BRILLIANT you made me cry thanks for that! this was so realistic, like this could have happened in the show and it's believable, simply amazing. Oh my god.
yellow-craion chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
It really was sad - but very beautiful, I wish there were more stories like yours. I enjoyed it. And I'm glad to see I wasn't the only one to misinterpret his reaction in that scene, with the DNA results.
Foxy005 chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
great story... :) one thing though. you wrote: "His hearts tightened"... unless Dave is suddenly a time lord I don't see this working. ;)
Cathy Daydreams chapter 1 . 10/2/2011
This is so beautiful ... so heartbreaking.

I do love how the kids still call him daddy though :,).

Keep going, you have a talent .x