Reviews for Dissonance
theBESTsithlord chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
Wow! Nicely done! The emotion is very vivid here. You've really come a long ways since I first read your work five years ago.

One thing that really makes this story so good is that you made it succinct; each phrase and each image has a purpose. You also were able to successfully stick to the idea of dissonance. Keep up the good work!
Nameless chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
Interesting idea on where Dist gets his name from, and why he and Jade clash so often - it fits the game's musical theme well and isn't one I've seen before. Also good take on Dist's love/hate relationship with Jade and Jade's own feelings for Dist. Well done.