Reviews for Look Beyond What You See
DroppingGlass chapter 20 . 4/21/2012
That was one of the most heartbreaking things I've ever read. I give you some serious props.

Seriously, that was some brilliant writing. I don't think I have the words to describe how I truly feel about it.

Thank you for this!
glowingblueforyou chapter 19 . 1/20/2012
*Bawls* You didn't have to make it DH-compliant! You should have let him live! :'( :'( :'( ... But, Bravo! Marvellous job! I had such an amazing time reading it! *gives a giant virtual hug* Thank you very much. Cheers!
glowingblueforyou chapter 6 . 1/16/2012
You are too good. and I love how Fred hold's George's wrist where he can feel his pulse. Its just sooo damn awesome! now I'm seriously very worried about the next chappy :((
glowingblueforyou chapter 4 . 1/16/2012
*bounces up and down in glee* Love love love it! and I love love love you and your amazing writing skills!
glowingblueforyou chapter 2 . 1/16/2012
Oh O_O a Cliffhanger! Can't wait. XX
glowingblueforyou chapter 1 . 1/16/2012
Wow!it funny how it never occurred to me that losing an ear has more to it.. how ignorant of me! but thanks to you... Oh well, anyway, brilliant first chapter... I love Fred's concern for George. Its so beautiful. On to the next one now.. you write so well! XX
stargirlak chapter 19 . 12/25/2011
this story...oh my goodness.

just amazing. and i have enjoyed every minute i have spent reading and rereading it (trust me, a lot of minutes!)

i was wondering if, by chance, if you were bored, that you could potentially write an alternate ending to your story in which Fred lives...?

it would be amazing. just saying!

anyway, thanks for such a great story!
watch-me-write chapter 19 . 11/28/2011
...So in the end, I couldn't help myself. And here I am, tears positively waterfalling down my face, feeling completely and totally depressed (I take full responsibility, blaming you not for my choice in choosing to read the epilogue) and just...beginning to mourn again, I guess haha.

I was trying so hard not to cry this time, but to no avail. Interestingly, it was Dennis and Colin that REALLY got me, and then when George just wanted Fred to come back at the end...well. You can probably imagine the state of my face now. Poor George. Poor Fred. Dammit J.K. Why? Why must you rip the siblings apart?

Like the rest of the fic, this was superb. Really. Though it indeed has probably put me in a state for maybe the rest of the evening, I loved it. Well. The way its written, of course, not so much that Fred died haha :P

MAN, I just want to WEEP! TT_TT -swearing inside head- As well as something to hug, now someone needs to give me flippin' bucket fulls of happiness and an older brother or two! I also demand Fred and George plushies, now. That would make me happier.

Anyhoo... -deep shaky breath- Once again, you have manipulated my emotions to the finest degree :) Wonderful work, as always. Ooh, and on a lighter note...why yes, I did just give you your 200th review for this fic :D Your welcome _

...aaaaand, back to depressing-ness XD Oh, I mean... TT_TT
watch-me-write chapter 18 . 11/28/2011

Ok, so, I did indeed get that message saying I should probably not read the epilogue if I wanted to imagine a happier ending for Fred, and I've JUST finished reading this last-ish chapter and my opinion on this story, without reading the epilogue, is still 9898728747727 STARS I LOVE YOU SO MUCH! D8

Oh God, so many emotional moments, they make me so depressed cos as soon as I saw you were still following the original plotline I wanted to cry anyway since...Haha, I'm still dancing undecided around the epilogue LOL, just to see if I want to really make myself cry or not! TT_TT

...AAaahhh, why must that be such an emotional goodbye? I want to cry already and I haven't glimpsed that last devil chapter yet! Honestly woman, I loved everything about this fic, the twins are just...Bill and Charlie...Molly... -tears well up- FOR LORDY'S SAKE, GIVE ME SOMETHING TO HUG! D'8

Ooh, I can tell you I was so flippin' jealous of Ginny though, haha :) To be honest, I've never liked Ginny, and I've never been quite sure why I don't like Ginny, but you did make her slightly more likable while also making me hate her for having all those older brothers, LOL!

Something else interesting that I've noted, all this time where I've been reading all of these Fred and George fics of yours, I've noticed a significant increase in sibling telepathy with my younger sister, haha. We're very close, but now its just getting ridiculous how we seem to be doing things at the same time, seemingly without really thinking about it, and thinking/talking about something without any preamble leading up to and knowing exactly what it is what we're talking about anyway :O Kinda scary...but lovely too :) Makes me feel closer to her, AND Fred and George XD

Anyways...I can't even tell you how much this fic blew my mind. Like, seriously. I loved every chapter and oh! Your actions scenes were WONDERFUL, I was flipping out so bad when they got separated and the Snatcher's were hurting George and Fred and aaaahhh! You were SO good! :D And even though I hated reading George being in pain/discomfort when he disapparated, it always warmed my heart when Fred was ALWAYS there and how when he was there the pain went away a bit quicker than when George was alone.

Oh. In this chapter, when George kissed Fred goodbye on the side of his head? Yeah. I totally almost threw myself over the edge of despair in snotty, sobbing tears. I was like, "DUDE YOU CAN'T DO THAT AND THEN LEAVE AND THEN THE EPILOGUE...! D'8" ...Yeah. It's just total despair for me at the moment, LOL, one because I dread what happens if I click the next button and also cos there's no more Fred x George fics of yours to read! :( I think I have to try and ween myself off them now, haha. Maybe I'll try plugging my tears with handfuls of Marauder fics... XD

Bloody brilliant, wonderful, lovely, amazing, simply SMASHING, awesome, excellent and just breathtakingly BEAUTIFUL! I really really really really REALLY REALLY REALLY hope you write more! You know...not that I want to pressure you, or anything... XD

Umm...I think this review is long enough now XD Haha, hope my review was satisfactory for you and made you happy _ I STILL LOVE YOU IMMENSELY FOR THIS, AND ALL THE OTHER FRED AND GEORGE FICS YOU'VE WRITTEN! KEEP UP THE AMAZING WORK! :')
watch-me-write chapter 2 . 11/28/2011
One concern so far, which was my thought after I finished reading the first chapter: "Oh shiznit, she's sticking to the books." Which is an immediate alarm bell, since we all know what happens to Fred at the end of the books... :O

Here's hoping things are different... DX

Haha, but very good, I love how you actually researched it! :) Makings of a true author, since they do that kind of stuff all the time and don't just go "Ah, shove it" and make up random shiznit for something that really shouldn't be, LOL. I commend you, and carry on with my reading :D
Mellyrox000 chapter 19 . 11/7/2011
Yep. I cried. I knew it...
Mellyrox000 chapter 18 . 11/7/2011
Oh I guess I'll have to read the epilogue since I enjoyed this story so much. Even though I know very well I'm going to cry.
pigs103 chapter 19 . 10/25/2011
i have never cried so hard in my entire life
ChaosBringer7 chapter 20 . 10/18/2011
fantastic story! I loved it to the very end. What if fred came back as a ghost?
SlyDevil.COOKIES chapter 20 . 10/17/2011
Awww my little fredddieee..HaHa, it was great and perfect correspondence with george's point of view. It was adorable when he blasted the wall and the three smartness got out that fred thought that if there was no yelling then george was ok and retreated then he disapperated. Awwwwww ok haha your an amazing writer! Keep writing! :D
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