Reviews for Look Beyond What You See
watch-me-write chapter 2 . 11/28/2011
One concern so far, which was my thought after I finished reading the first chapter: "Oh shiznit, she's sticking to the books." Which is an immediate alarm bell, since we all know what happens to Fred at the end of the books... :O

Here's hoping things are different... DX

Haha, but very good, I love how you actually researched it! :) Makings of a true author, since they do that kind of stuff all the time and don't just go "Ah, shove it" and make up random shiznit for something that really shouldn't be, LOL. I commend you, and carry on with my reading :D
Mellyrox000 chapter 19 . 11/7/2011
Yep. I cried. I knew it...
Mellyrox000 chapter 18 . 11/7/2011
Oh I guess I'll have to read the epilogue since I enjoyed this story so much. Even though I know very well I'm going to cry.
pigs103 chapter 19 . 10/25/2011
i have never cried so hard in my entire life
ChaosBringer7 chapter 20 . 10/18/2011
fantastic story! I loved it to the very end. What if fred came back as a ghost?
SlyDevil.COOKIES chapter 20 . 10/17/2011
Awww my little fredddieee..HaHa, it was great and perfect correspondence with george's point of view. It was adorable when he blasted the wall and the three smartness got out that fred thought that if there was no yelling then george was ok and retreated then he disapperated. Awwwwww ok haha your an amazing writer! Keep writing! :D
chocolateMnMs chapter 20 . 10/17/2011
nice..luv it! srry am to lazy to log on..
Aris1013 chapter 20 . 10/17/2011
I was so happy to see a new chapter :) I was very curious about Fred's POV in this chapter, I am so glad you decided to write it! Great job :D
Seasonal Dreamer chapter 20 . 10/17/2011
OMG! THIS WAS ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL! It was so great to read it from Fred's perspective and it was so adorable! I absolutely loved it :D

~Maddy
Carkey chapter 20 . 10/17/2011
THANK YOU!

I was so excited to see this posted! It was everything I hoped it would be and certainly answered my curiosity as to what happened to Fred once they split up. It was also nice to see the concern coming from Fred's eyes for a chance instead of Fred's concern through George's eyes. Gave it a fresh perspective for sure.

Hoping you may have some more secret chapters up your sleeve, haha. Or that a new story is on its way someday soon...

thank you so much for taking my suggestion!
slimygrimy chapter 20 . 10/17/2011
This was great! Poor Fred, I almost felt as sorry for him as I did for George! Not quite though ;)
keep my issues drawn chapter 20 . 10/17/2011
I swear I almost had a heart attack when I knew there was another chapter! :') Amazing, you didn't make me cry, but you were pretty close! I think I may have something in my eye *goes to sob in a corner* Amazing, still can't believe this is over! Two of my favourite stories are ending soon, and this one that is one of my favourites has also ended. :'( I must find some good new stories!

I will miss this story, and I hope you write others soon!

Much love, your first ever reviewer ;)
Lucy Beale chapter 20 . 10/17/2011
Hey :)

I did a happy dance when i saw you posted someting! ... Still doing it in fact!

I miss this story so much! And you only finished it like.. a few days ago :D

You just should keep posting.. doesn't matter what :D I loooooove the relationship of Fred and George..

Plus: This chapter didn't end with Fred being dead so I can talk myself into believing that Fred isn't dead :D

Anyways.. just wanted to tell you how happy I was about this chapter :) You did a really good job!

Love, Lucy x
Atherin chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
So sad, oh my god...It made me cry.

You definately have talent, you deserve more credit then you give yourself.

You should write a sequel because this stuff is really good. (:
SlyDevil.COOKIES chapter 19 . 10/16/2011
Aw, my little georgieee! Great ending! I know I said keep him Alive haha but this is good, I love charlie and his big brotherness. And I like when you said funny how a classroom could stay but Fred couldnt. Aww my little freddieeee. Well that was an amazing story, please continue writin otter story's and question do you like the dramione stuff? If you do could your next story be about them? Or Antibes fred and george one haha. Loved it! Keep writing!
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