|Reviews for Broken Pieces|
| Azure Shine chapter 24 . 2/5/2013
OH, sad ending -_- i read you make seque this story, i hope that is happy ending :)
| Guest chapter 24 . 1/27/2013
Omg i love it this made me cry!
| JasmineDragon22 chapter 24 . 1/21/2013
What an awesome story I was so hooked from beginning to end! Can't wait to read the sequel :)
| Anfitrite-aquarius chapter 24 . 1/13/2013
i have no words, i read this in a day! what a excelent fic! love it! great great work!
| Hana-chanS2 chapter 18 . 12/15/2012
Omg "the will to protect is infinitely more powerful than the will to destroy." LOOOOL the cheesiness. i was laughing so hard i almost dropped my phone. but overall the story is good.
| SleevedWhiteSnow chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
Added this to my alert to read later a while ago, and what can I say? This my absolute favorite Rurouni Kenshin story. I just love your writing style and you captured the moments perfectly, it's hard to stop reading. Well done, and congratulations on over 4000 reviews, 'cause this sure deserves it!
| Tsukiko Saito chapter 24 . 12/2/2012
Beautiful just beautiful... A bittersweet ending for one of my favorite couples. This is the first RK fanfiction (or overall fanfiction stories) that made tears in my eyes. I am so glad that I take a chance to finish it even though I sometimes avoid reading it fearing that it made may end up in a tragic-sort of ending.
Overall, one of the best fanfiction stories I have ever read. Hope you update its sequel...
| celestialdimplez chapter 24 . 11/21/2012
I kid you not when I say this. Best fanfic I have read on here period!
| kwangie chapter 24 . 10/20/2012
TT that's me now...but im not allowing the tears to fall coz im not the only person in the room. although i wanted to read it alone so that i could allow my tears, i couldn't stop myself from finishing it all.
i kinda miss the protective battosai than the clueless rurouni haha loved it anyway..there's something missing though...the lemon what happened to it? lol i was kinda excited in reading those parts (especially their first time!) coz you seem very good at them. its always my cherry on top of every fanfiction i read. hopefully there's a link to it somewhere :)
Thank you again, glad i read your fic even though im usually not into AUs
| Illusions of Dreaming chapter 24 . 10/5/2012
gah! D': this is such a beautiful story! the character development is beautiful, you didn't rush the romance and let it slowly develop, it's really hard to find romance stories that don't leap straight to LOVE-AT-FIRST-SIGHT thing xD
this is beautiful xD please update the sequel soon! I'd love to read more about Kenshin and Kaoru 33
| Guest chapter 17 . 8/12/2012
Alright, first of all he killed a woman when he had to kill the dude with the pig nose. Second of all, if Kaoru has scars on her belly how could she go scantily clad to that one place where the pig-guy had the party and Kenshin didn't notice. Plus she's been like naked in front of him a million times...
| plumafleur chapter 24 . 8/7/2012
The best fan fiction i have ever read. It made Kenshin and Kaoru as main characters only a bonus . Thank you very much for sharing this story with all of us.
| A skeleton chapter 24 . 8/4/2012
This is my favorite story of all time... Wow, what an ending! Glad I read the whole thing!
| xailia chapter 24 . 7/20/2012
I'll have you know that I specifically signed up for an account just so I could post the following comment:
This ending made me nearly cry, and I NEVER cry from stories :( I dislike that only Kaoru bears all the memories, whereas Kenshin is free and happy. In a healthy relationship, both people should be equally agonized...
I kid. Well, to some extent. Moving on...
I am impressed. Beyond impressed. I am stunned, moved, and left wanting to read more of your writing.
You took two already well-developed manga characters and were able to draw out two more different (well not completely different in Kenshin's case, but at least not greatly explored) and extremely well-developed characters. I am extremely impressed by how you did not simply fall back to Watsuki's characters. Instead, I read this entire fanfiction as a novel all in itself, completely separate from the universe and characters that Watsuki created, the only similarity being the name and appearance of the characters.
Huh, ok, so I guess that's what fanfiction is all about, but somehow I did not expect this high quality of writing in a simple fanfiction. The writing style, the plot development, the ending-oh god the ending-everything was so perfectly orchestrated! One thing that stood out as recurring a bit too much was the overuse of suspense/cliffhanger IMO. Don't get me wrong- I loved it and you did an excellent job with the suspense/cliffhangers, but there were quite a few instances where the reader was left wondering for a few paragraphs/half the entire web page before the answer was revealed and the reader thought "Ah, there we go." Perhaps this has more to do with the "Angst" genre that you have chosen for this fanfiction rather than your writing style itself, but I just felt that the suspense/cliffhangers with the final one-word (or one-sentence) answers at the end of the page was a tad overdone- just a tad. Hopefully I make sense...if not, simply regard this as the ramblings of just another crazy fan.
Excellent work, nonetheless. I look forward to more of your works :)
| Vanquish123 chapter 24 . 7/15/2012
I just finished reading, and I have to say that this was an amazing story. I'm usually not drawn to dark fics like these, though. Since they usually end a bit sad, and end up making me a bit depressed myself. Your ending is no exception. In my opinion, if it doesn't end in a happy ending, then I consider it a sad ending. Overall though, the story was great. I loved the character development, the great writing, dialogue, and even the characters were very entertaining. Thank you for writing this story, I really enjoyed it. I'll read the sequel someday, but right now, I just need to read something happy and full of fluff.