Reviews for NaruTen: Love Begins
Guest chapter 1 . 3/4
Hopefully constructive criticism
This was confusing to me, as there was no adequate explanation of why tenten had long feelings for him, and even less of why naruto suddenly had feelings for her. People don't immediately proclaim everlasting love for people after noticing for the first time "hey, they're kinda cute". The whole thing was so OOC that I couldn't finish. If there had been more explanation as to WHY they suddenly were in love I might have thoroughly enjoyed it
Greekfreek1 chapter 1 . 12/22/2017
I Am Truly Sorry This Story Has Potential But And I Normally Hate Saying This But Its Too Much Of A Cliché And There Are A Lot Of Cringe Worthy Moments In The First Chapter Alone But Otherwise It Is A Pretty Good Story And If You Keep Trying You'll All Right And Your Stories Will Be Excellent To Read
SPBRX chapter 1 . 10/28/2017
Should have used weapons mistress
Yahuu chapter 1 . 5/18/2017
Yahuu! Uraa!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/6/2017
oh god this is too cliche! *barfs*
YeagerMeister31 chapter 32 . 2/4/2017
well this was an interesting chapter and so sweet
YeagerMeister31 chapter 31 . 2/3/2017
now that was a nice sweet chapter
YeagerMeister31 chapter 30 . 2/2/2017
well this was interesting Pedo Snake and Sasgay think there tough oh this should be so much fun
YeagerMeister31 chapter 29 . 2/2/2017
well that was interesting Kabuto's dead Muahahaha and Sasgay got his ass kicked well Naruto was hardly trying
YeagerMeister31 chapter 28 . 2/2/2017
well this should be interesting Sasgay's about to get his butt kicked should be an awesome sight
YeagerMeister31 chapter 27 . 2/2/2017
well that was a funny chapter Tenten kicked ass
YeagerMeister31 chapter 26 . 2/1/2017
well this was an entertaining chapter
YeagerMeister31 chapter 25 . 2/1/2017
well this was interesting Tangokage that's a new one quite short but enjoyable
YeagerMeister31 chapter 24 . 1/31/2017
well that was an interesting fight that's for sure
YeagerMeister31 chapter 23 . 1/31/2017
Tenten vs Mei should be quite interesting fight
160 | Page 1 2 3 4 .. Last Next »