Reviews for NaruTen: Love Begins
Guest chapter 36 . 4/8
Great story!
Guest chapter 4 . 2/16
When the s to his supposed to be set because if there supposed to be 12 this is kinda weird you have mentioned sex between not even teenagers if I'm reading correctly kinda wierd
killua menace chapter 36 . 1/19
I have to admit most of the nice things i post are usually because I want to make the writer feel like they did something but this is something else entirely this is a story that I am sure almost everyone is certain to love
Guest chapter 36 . 11/29/2014
BEST FANFIC EVER
Z chapter 7 . 11/19/2014
im enjoying the lemon scenes and all but im also having trouble seing where this story is going... is there going to be some kind of conflict? if not than this story needs some updating...
Z chapter 6 . 11/19/2014
How the hell did it go from kiba to shikamaru? kiba wasin the last chapter but then suddenly its shikamaru. WTF?
Guest chapter 36 . 10/30/2014
the only thing i can bring up is how did the love start seems like naruto and tenten were suddenly smacked upside the head with cupid's sleghamer
Kurokawa-kun chapter 36 . 10/25/2014
Is there a sequel to NaruTen: Love Begins?
MasterHollow chapter 1 . 8/18/2014
Ok I felt that went way too fast
Darklordcomp chapter 1 . 8/13/2014
what? they meet each other then bam i love u...what?
Rebellious Uzumaki chapter 36 . 6/29/2014
You really need to update your stories man
meowy1986 chapter 14 . 5/28/2014
love the story ..but there is some plot holes...last chapter you said that naruto and tenten havent even used 1% of power against kakashi..so even at like 2% naruto could of beaten him solo same with ten... but then in this chapter you say that naruto says that him and ten can take on 2 akatsuki each..but problem is..if naruto used 50% or more..not even madara could beat naruto..naruto at 100% would be godlike..no akatsuki would be able to beat them..hell probably not even at 10% would pein or itachi beat them
meowy1986 chapter 13 . 5/28/2014
you say they didnt even sratch 1% on there power..wouldnt that make them godlike if they went all out? lol
meowy1986 chapter 6 . 5/28/2014
i havent read this story in a LONG time..but i kinda came across something thats confuseing me... you said that 36 miles and it would take them 16 hours to reach the village..idk if you realize but yes 36 miles in 16 horus walkign or running might be slightly impossible...BUT in the naruto verse ninjas run at least as fast as aq car when they are pushing chakra to there feet. they could of easily gotten 36 miles in like 1 hour
Guest chapter 19 . 4/27/2014
When i started reading this story i really didnt expect to read this wedding planning shit
Anyways its an alright story
I think you made naruto fall for tenten too fast... And there's too much fluff for my liking
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