Reviews for It Isn't Over Yet
lovedwardalways chapter 2 . 9/14/2011
Wow you write cold heartless bastard so well. On her birthday no less dang that is vicious. Can't wait to read more.
Kgunter34 chapter 2 . 9/14/2011
Holy shit Batman. I think that was the most hurtful breakup I have read. Great chapter.
Siobhan Whitlock chapter 2 . 9/14/2011
oh JEEBUS! Yeah... my chest cracked open on that one.

What the hell... what was he thinking?
Sipitbigapple62 chapter 2 . 9/13/2011
One mean,heartless Edward! He needed a kick up the arse for that! Yes we trust you,you'll do right by us. Have to have the awful times,they help you appreciate the good times. xx
kroseph chapter 2 . 9/13/2011
Brutal but good! I just read both chapters, the first with Adele's song was so tormented and mirrors what her song is about. Certainly is a different side of Edward.

Great job, I'll be looking for the update-still at every 2 weeks?

Thanks ;)
Bunch2009 chapter 1 . 9/13/2011
Loved it!
Bunch2009 chapter 2 . 9/13/2011
Wow that was really heartless. Even if he was just pretending and doesn't mean what he said that was so heartless that if I was Bella I don't think I will be able to forgive him. Great chapter
lvtwilight09 chapter 2 . 9/13/2011
*hands you the silver platter that now has my heart on it* Seriously, you totally ripped my heart out with this one. You know how I feel about this one, you had me sobbing the first time I read it. Amazing job hun, loved it!
deedee cullen chapter 1 . 9/12/2011
Holy shit! That was an amazing first chapter. It had so much emotions in it.
lovedwardalways chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
Oh yeah totally make me cry with that one. Love it I know this story will be amazing. Great start. Oh course I vote for you.
texasbella chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
You know my thoughts...I was hooked from the first partial chapter you sent to me to beta. As much as I am enjoying Until I Saw You...for me, this one is going to be your "golden onion"...all that I've seen of it so far has just gone straight to my heart and to my gut and I can only imagine what it has done to you to form the words. I'm proud of you babygirl!
pattie g chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
Ah I love the new story. I can't wait for more.
Cat don't know why not log on chapter 1 . 9/8/2011
Great start bb! I'm already hating your Edward! :) He better redeam himself or I'm gonna cut his balls off, js. ;)

So sad for Bella. The fucker didn't know what he had.

Can't wait to read their journey!


Midnight Cougar chapter 1 . 9/8/2011
*I VOTED*! xo Now, for this story...holy shit Massy, that was an incredible Prologue, I could feel her anguish *wipes my tears* I loved how you set the story so solidly, the characters, history, & then left us with what we can expect in a future storyline. Wow, so sad, & that song - powerful, yet beautiful! Absolutely, totally in here, can't wait for more. xo MC
nmydreamz chapter 1 . 9/8/2011
Brilliant first chapter, M! I'm so happy and proud of you for stepping up to the plate with this. So emotional is this Bella and what an ass Edward has been. I could strangle him right now! I can't wait for you to bring us thru the past to the present with this one. Soooo good! I'll pimp where I can, of course :)

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