|Reviews for Eye of the Storm|
| Dragon.Lady.Day chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
I think you meant Harlot, not scarlet. If not, sorry. Great story idea!
| acciomysteriousbubbles chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
Pretty good but I don't think Molly would get that mad she loves mione like a daughter jaha :D
| thegoodgirldoll chapter 1 . 9/8/2011
That was wonderful! I absolutely loved it! You were so creative. It flowed evenly, and the song worked beautifully. You changed my perspective of it. Have you listened to the song? I hope you really enjoyed doing this challenge! Full points for the song, writing abilities, and grammar. You used the characters well, I only would have made Molly a tad happier for her son, rather than scolding. All in all a wonderful piece of work. I'm glad I see people already reviewing!
| Bessi again chapter 1 . 9/8/2011
Sorry, it wasn't your first story, my mistake.
| Bessi chapter 1 . 9/8/2011
Cute story! The only criticism I have is that Molly is a little OOC. She would be slightly against their living situation, you know without them being married, but I don't see her being so furious about it. I mean it's Hermione, her almost second daughter, her son is about to live with. But it's your story, so again for your first attempt nice work. It's flawless and really cute.
Greetings from Germany, Bessi