Reviews for Yandere
AkaiNeko4 chapter 1 . 4/25/2013
So it wasn't great, but it could have been good. I might have actually enjoyed it if you had written Sayaka, who is tied to a pole and being tortured to death, sympathetically. Instead you wrote a shitty bash fic, and I'm leaving you a bad review. Also AUs make it hard to keep continuity straight, and in this case it only further weakens your case.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/18/2012
interesting concept! i like it. it's in character but a little twisted haha :3 the writing style needs a bit of work though! but you will get there *u* you have a lot of potential! :3
Danny Barefoot chapter 1 . 9/22/2011
Nasty, poor Sayaka has it rather hard, with no let up.
BonesxBreak chapter 1 . 9/8/2011
Heh, this is something like what I imagine the Homura in my fic would've done if Madoka hadn't been there.

Might've been more effective if Sayaka could have felt physical pain, but can't really complain.

my only criticism would really be that the underlined/bold/caps locked words from Homura make it hard to visualize her saying those things with a straight face and 'bored' tone.
Broth3r chapter 1 . 9/8/2011
Right now, I have an urge to do the exact same thing to Homura.

And the best of it is that Kyubey would on get one witch :D